I count a string of them on the power line:
one, two, three, four, five pigeons,
plump, grey, grumbling curmudgeons,
comical and pearly – and with a loud
clap of wings they explode,
like fireworks that have lost their sparks,
and disappear into the dark.
Kim M. Russell, 30th September 2024

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This Monday at the dVerse Poets Pub we are plucking strings and writing quadrilles, our poetic form of just 44 words (not counting the title), including one word provided by our host, Lisa, who suggests lots of ways in which the word ‘string’ can be used. She has also shared poems that mention the word ‘string’ by Diane Seuss, Kahlil Gibran, Truong Tran, Bob Kaufman and Paisley Rekdal.
I have resurrected and rewritten a poem from September 2020 into a quadrille.
I love the way you describe those pigeons… especially “grumbling curmudgeons”, that was a new word for me… but it does make sense, they look like they are dressed in coats of worsted wool.
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THey do, don’t they!
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Haha, I enjoyed your take, Kim. You’ve described the pigeons well. 🙂
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Thank you, Kitty!
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Kim, I appreciate your intimate acquaintance in words with the ways of the pigeons. It’s easy to count them when they line up on the power lines, and it presents a photo op 🙂
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Thanks Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Lovely…almost like an extended haiku, that brief moment caught.
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Thanks so much, Ain!
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Exploding firework pigeons! Love it!
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Thanks Jane!
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very interesting image abd one i can relate too so easily
much♡love
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Thank you Gillena. Much love to you on this wet Tuesday.
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I love this pigeon poem, and boy when they fly off they do explode like fire crackers! I love pigeons and have two little spotted doves nesting under my deck at the moment, the little bubba’s are about to take flight. Gorgeous birds, pigeons of all kinds! 🙂
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Thank you, Dianne. Pigeons are fun to watch.
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They are fabulous!!
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I love this – such memorable, creative, and absolutely spot-on descriptions of those pigeons
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Thanks so much. The pigeons out here in the country are so well fed and very vocal. I love watching them.
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A fun read.
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Thank you, Maria.
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giving you a clap Kim for the visuals you strung out here
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Thank you, Laura. I’m giving you a bow. 😊
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Love that ending. I could hear the exploding clap of wings.
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Thank you, Maria.
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This is marvellous Kim.
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Thanks Kim!
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I love how dynamic you made this one, Kim. I can see the fluttery explosions so clearly. Well-done.
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Thank you, Katie!
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Ha – I could see and hear their grumbling – This phrase is perfectly expressed and made me smile.
grumbling curmudgeons,
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Thank you, Truedessa.
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plump, grey, grumbling curmudgeons,
wonderful description Kim ☺️💕
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Thank you, Christine!
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You describe them perfectly, Kim! They are quite a nuisance here.
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Thank you, Punam. When we went to the van Gogh exhibition in London, I was shocked that here are no longer pigeons in Trafalgar Square.
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You are welcome, Kim. Is it so? I always associate Trafalgar square with pigeons!
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Sadly, yes. But I have very civilised pigeons in my garden – country pigeons are different to the city ones.
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Oh, dear. Really? Are they very different?
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The ones in London are undernourished, some only have one leg or eye, and they are generally regarded as vermin. Ours are well-fed, very pretty and delightful.
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Hmmm. Here too we regard them as vermin.
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So accurately described! Spot on!
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Thank you, Carol!
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“plump, grey, grumbling curmudgeons,
comical and pearly “
Great imagery here, Kim!
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Thanks so much, Sara!
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The metaphor of fireworks works brilliantly, Kim. Loved it, and this description too: “comical and pearly.” 🙂
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Thank you so much, Dora!
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Kim, this so describes that very moment as I know it, wonderful.
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Thanks Paul!
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