It’s that time of year again
when, in the horologist’s shop,
clocks argue about the correct time
or stop
at some haunting hour to hint
at lighter mornings
and longer days,
and long to spring
forward into bluer skies,
greener branches and meadows,
and more rainbows.
Kim M. Russell, 27th January 2025

Image by Jon Tyson on Unsplash
It’s Quadrille Monday at the dVerse Poets Pub, where Mish is our host asking if we can take a hint and ‘fit your wonderful, wandering muse into exactly 44 words, not including the title, and containing a word given by our host. The word is ‘hint’, and I enjoyed the poems Mish found with that word.
As always, Mish asks us to find a way to incorporate the word hint into our poems, the theme and style of which is open.
“and long to spring
forward into bluer skies,”
a double entendre for season and clockwork – brilliant poem Kim
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Thank you, Laura!
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I love how the daylight is slowly coming back… sunset at 4 pm… wow
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But today it was very dark already due to heavy rain.
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Love the arguing clocks! Great line and nice line-break after ‘stop’. Roll on spring indeed!
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Thank you, Paul!
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Lovely! I like the personification of those clocks arguing and the alliteration of “some haunting hour to hint”. We do need more rainbows.
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Thank you, Mish. I was hoping for rainbows today when we had sunshine and rain together.
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I like the visual of clocks arguing in the shop about what time it is. Nicely done, Kim!
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re welcome, Kim.
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Always rainbows.🌈
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Smiles
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“lighter mornings and longer days,” … sigh… yes, I am longing for them too, Kim! A stunning 44 poem 😍😍
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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You’re most welcome 😘
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Lovely tone—especially those troublesome watches!
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Thanks Ain!
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I can imagine a shop where:
clocks argue about the correct time
or stop
at some haunting hour to hint
Time slows down for me in January.
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January is a strange time of year.
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I can feel the shift in light as sunset is now stretching a bit later. A hint of longer days to come.
Of course now I have all those clocks in my mind…squabbling over time.
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They could be in a cartoon.
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Tick Tock the time is moving on to a brighter day! Very nicely done, Kim.
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Thank you, Dwight!
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Very nice. I like the sense of confused time in your poem as we stumble towards spring.
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Thanks Stew!
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I could imagine clocks arguing…in a little dark shop tucked away in some corner of the city. Wonderful and imaginative poem, Kim.
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Thank you, Dianne!
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A fitting poem for the season.
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Thank you, Maria.
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Lovely! The quarrelling clocks such a powerful imagery and wonderful alliteration, Kim.
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Thank you kindly, Punam!
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Great poem, Kim! I cannot wait to have longer days and more sunshine!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette!
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This made me smile! I loved the arguing clocks ☺️. I wish we could all just be on daylight savings time or BST as you say in the UK all year round. More daylight, more chance to be outside and no more need for recovery time losing an hour or gaining an hour
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Thank you, Christine!
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Ahhh…this is lovely, Kim. Wonderful.
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Thank you very much, Jennifer!
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It’s always something I look forward to when we ‘spring forward’ an hour for daylight saving time. Great write!
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Thank you, Carol!
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I love the positivity in your poem, Kim,
“greener branches and meadows,and more rainbows” is great and indeed something I look forward to.
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Thank you!
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Kim,
Thanks for teaching me a new word, “horologist.” Well done.
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Thank you, Ali!
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Definitely more rainbows!
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