An orchard’s fruit and its aromas
are laden with sweet memories:
a windfall of sparkling baubles
or a bird café of dulcet squabbles
over worms in russet orbs that end
as feasts for feathered friends.
Each bite of your acidic sweetness
arouses a harvest of ripe blushes
beneath a tree, under cover of night.
‘I am sweet temptation in moonlight,’
your apple breath whispers again,
and we linger, despite the autumn rain.
Kim M. Russell, 4th February 2025

Image by Kelly Sikkema on Unsplash
For this Tuesday’s Poetics at the dVerse Poets Pub, Dora would like us to reimagine the familiar.
Dora says that we’ve “We’ve seen talented and oftentimes anonymous artists create graffiti, taking the familiar sides of buildings and walls and reimagining them, creating memorable, though ephemeral, street art. Yarn bombing is a type of street art that covers a familiar public structure, a park bench or phone booth, defamiliarizing it with a display of knitted or crocheted yarn.”
We’ve seen novelists and poets do it, too, and Dora has given us some great examples by Louise Gluck, Rhina P. Espaillat, W.B. Yeats, Mary Oliver and Evan Boland, to inspire us to take something familiar and reimagine it in some way. She has even given us a list of suggestions.
I have reworked a poem I first posted on 29th April 2023 for NaPoWriMo.
Ah, the romance of the apple, and “under cover of the night,” a “sweet temptation” unlikely to be resisted. I love how you played off the old Edenic trope and the first stanza’s “bird cafe” feast!
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Thank you very much for your close reading, Dora.
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This is stunning work done, Kim! 😍 I especially admire; “your apple breath whispers again, and we linger.” So romantic! 🩷🩷
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Thank you so much, Sanaa!
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I love this about apples.. and the reference to apples made me think of Wassail which I recently listened to a podcast about. The apples as a source for cider.
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Thank you, Björn. I prefer cider to beer.
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ahh that last line so sweet and lovely
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Thank you, Laura.
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Kim, I’ll never eat another apple without thinking of your poem. Yummy!
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Smiles!
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Yum. No surprise that Adam couldn’t refuse a bite of Eve. Fine, elegant close.
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Cheers Brendan!
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That lovely feeling of the verse whispered in my ears. Soft, sweet, a certain elegance, with that lovely ending.
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What a generous comment, AIn!
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Superbly done, Kim. I love this. It’s flawless.
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Gorgeous. I can’t say enough good things about this.
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Thank you, Jennifer.
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Luscious writing, Kim!
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Thank you, Carol.
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A very nice poem of sweet temptation!
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Thank you, Dwight.
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You are welcome, Kim.
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This poem creates such a pretty image in my mind. Thank you, Kim.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Robbie.
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That was beautiful, Kim! Great poem!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thanks Yvette!
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gorgeous Kim. This tempting image of the lovely Apple goes a long way. You know how to line your words well. Love this to pieces. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Selma.
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Ooh la la, such sensory titillation. Love the merging of apple and desire here, Kim.
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Thank Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Delicious writing, Kim. I especially loved, ” a bird café of dulcet squabbles” and “a harvest of ripe blushes”!
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Thank you, Punam!
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Swoon making romance Kim – Sanaa may have to move over…
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Cheers Andrew!
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Ah, the whispered breath of an apple. I love it!
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Thank you, Sara!
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