I often wondered how life might have been growing up as
Alice.
That was a name and an adventure I admired when I was
a child.
Would I have been a girl who followed rabbits, met queens,
consumed
potions and cake, and wasn’t afraid of
magic?
Or would I eventually have lost my head? I
wonder.
Kim M. Russell, 6th March 2025
It’s the first Thursday in March and, at the dVerse Poets Pub we are writing poetry of names for Meeting the Bar with our host, Laura, who begins her prompt with a lovely quotation from Pablo Neruda.
Not only is today World Book Day and my grandson’s seventh birthday, but Laura tells us that it is also ‘Learn what your name means’ day. She says it’s ‘a light-hearted day of discovery but yet it touches our core identity. One of the first sounds we hear is our allotted name, one of the first nouns we learn and one that firmly embeds the I-self as not-you, not-other.’
Laura has given examples of poems about names by Teresa Mei Chuc and Rachel Sherwood, to inspire us to write in a WaltMarie poetry style, which was invented by Candace Kubinec as a nod to Poetic Bloomings hosts, Marie Elena Good and Walter J. Wojtanik. It consists of ten lines, in which the even lines are just two syllables and make their own mini-poem if read separately, while odd lines are longer but without syllable restriction, and meter and rhyme are unspecified. The theme of our poems should be: the history/meaning of our names, or one we wish we had, or an imaginary one

very deftly done Kim – the enjambment makes the style flow down the rabbit hole beautifully. Also loved how you supposed Alice
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Thank you, Laura.
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Wondering what it would be like (an adventure in itself), you take us into Alice’s wonderland as if her name itself were a charm. Lovely use of the form, Kim.
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Thanks so much, Dora.
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There was so much there, of literature…and a sort of amusing ending, very literary, you did a lot with a highly constraining form.
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I mean cause the head getting chopped off could not really be counted as funny, though I laughed…
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Cheers Ain!
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Very clever, Kim! Another Alice in Wonderland fan, yay!
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Thank you, Nolcha. There seem to be quite a few of us.
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Oh my goodness, Kim! We’re definitely related methinks! Love your take on Alice and I totally relate!!! Wow!
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Thank you, Carol!
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Great second to last line. Would you hear the Queen yell, Off with her head!?
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Thank you, Rebecca. That’s one thing I would be worried about!
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Such a cute pondering. Just like Alice, you would have wrangled the zoo ❤
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Thanks Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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concise tight brilliant little musing poem . Kudos, Kim. I wonder if anything would be different it’d we had gotten different names…
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Thank you, Eric. I’ve often thought about that.
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I like your “wondering” here. Would life have been any different for us had we’d been named another name? I have to say, I like your given name, though. It was the name of one of my best friends when I was young.
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Thank you very much, Jennifer.
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Like myself, Kim, I imagine Alice in Wonderland is part of your literary DNA – wonderful!
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Than you, Andrew.
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Love this little adventure Kim. I wonder too ☺️💕
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Thank you, Christine.
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Love this, Kim! Who knows you would have had a more adventurous life than that Alice. You used the form very well.
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Thank you, Punam.
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You are welcome, Kim.
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You have a great name, Alice. You have a vivid imagination, Kim! I love it.
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Thank you, Dwight!
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You are welcome. Hope you are feeling better!
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Love the musing in this, Kim. Nice little inside poem, too.
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Thank you, Candy.
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Great poem, Kim!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette!
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I love your questioning, a delightful muse on what if? And your even lines work beautifully.
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Thank you, Paul.
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Very welcome Kim 🙂
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