The Egg and the Key

I found an egg, smooth and new;
it was warm so I gave it to you –
I wanted to see what you would do.

Flocks of birds surrounded us two,
they dived and swooped and flew
until the sky turned a leaden hue.

You took my hand, so I followed you
to the aquarium at a nearby zoo,
and the flock of birds followed us too.

You had a key, it was silver and new,
which let us in to a steamy stew,
where alien creatures hatched and grew.

Our egg cracked in the peculiar brew,
a dragon was born, it was green and blue,
a child of our love that was pure and true.

Kim M. Russell, 17th April 2025

On the seventeenth day of NaPoWriMo, the daily resource today is a museum I spent a wonderful day visiting some years ago, The Ashmolean in Oxford, where there was a special exhibition about Witchcraft – I even bought a catalogue. I remember the samurai’s ceremonial suit of armour, although I really liked the Egyptian collection.

Today’s optional prompt introduced me to the surrealist painters Remedios Varo and Leonora Carrington, who had a life-long friendship. Our challenge is to write a poem themed around friendship, with imagery or other ideas taken from a painting by Carrington, and a painting by Varo.

I was inspired by ‘The Giantess / Guardian of the Egg’ by Leonora Carrington and By Aquarium by Remedios Varo, which took me to a Doctor Seuss surreal kind of poem.

10 thoughts on “The Egg and the Key

  1. Gorgeously surreal, Kim! Love the rhyming tercets throughout. Favorite stanza: “You had a key, it was silver and new, / which let us in to a steamy stew, / where alien creatures hatched and grew.” So vivid and cinematic!

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