Through lingering shadows of the past,
times of struggle, revolution and dissent,
they anchor themselves deep and fast
to an increasingly unsettled present.
Helplessly, they wait in public places,
hotels, malls, and libraries where,
helpfully, a librarian ghost traces
haiku as he escorts you to a chair.
Eerily, they haunt crannies and nooks,
entering museums and classrooms,
easing themselves into pages of books,
etching words on churchyard tombs.
Egregiously, they are free to wander,
earlier obligations do not cease with death;
every ghost is condemned to ponder
each sin and broken promise after their last breath.
Kim M. Russell, 29th May 2025

This week at the dVerse Poets Pub we are meeting the bar with Grace and the Trolaan, a poetic form created by Valerie Peterson Brown.
The Trolaan is a poem consisting of four quatrains, of which each line begins with the same letter. Starting with the second stanza, take the second letter of the first line of the first stanza to begin each line. For the third stanza, use the second letter on the first line of the second stanza, with each line beginning with that letter. For the fourth stanza, use the second letter on the first line of the third stanza, with each line beginning with that letter. The rhyme scheme is abab.
Grace has provided an example to help us. It’s tricky! I found inspiration in an old poem.
That is an eerie time to wait in public places and being free to wander around. Yet the heaviness of obligations, sins and broken promises linger on. Love the trolaan poem Kim. This is favorite part:
helpfully, a librarian ghost traces
haiku as he escorts you to a chair.
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Thanks so much, Grace.
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Liked this very much! You used the repeated letters to excellent effect
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting,
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SO full of atmosphere…SO entertaining, superb storytelling…great line with the haiku…..this is very nice to read.
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Many thanks, Ain.
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pity those ghost, better to rest in peace
Nice
much♡love
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Thanks Gillena, and much love to you.
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Amazing. You did a wonderful job of writing to this prompt! It flows well and creatively and does not feel ihibited by the rules.
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Thank you very much, Judy.
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the pass will, always hang over our heads like a dark shadow, like those ghosts of our pasts that haunt us all, and, we’re, too scared, too, unready to deal with our pasts, and so, we keep on, running, trying to escape, not knowing, that we simply, can’t outrun our own, pasts, that the only way that they will stop haunting us is if we, turn around, and FACE them…but we still, all try to, escape from our pasts.
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True.
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Ghosts tend to linger everywhere some are just more quiet than others. Perhaps, they have found some atonement for their sins and broken promises. I guess we are all guilty but, I hope there is forgiveness in the last breath.
At first I thought the ghost was a reference to words ….loved the line abut the haiku…perhaps, it is the about the ghosts of our poetic world.
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I agree, Truedessa.
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Nicely done Kim. You handled the form very well!
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Thanks Dwight!
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Good one, Kim…I especially like the librarian ghost 🙂
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Thank you, Lynn.
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indeed, this was very tricky! i love your theme and title. oh, and the photo too. 3 for 3 = knocked it out of the ballpark. ❤
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Thank you, Ren!
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Some ghosts seem to linger until the sense of sins and wandering are no longer pressing perhaps, I remember one house we lived in (old by local standards here) there was a presence I felt and once saw, and when I talked to them about being free to go, they did. This tapped into my experience Kim, thanks for the evocation. But also thank you for a great Trolaan
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Thanks for sharing, Paul. I’ve had some haunting experiences too!
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❤️
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Great poem, Kim! You were brave to tackle so many e’s! Lol!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thanks Yvette. When re-read it I wondered about that too!
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Very atmospheric, Kim and it flowed superbly.
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Thanks very much, Punam.
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My pleasure, Kim.
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“a librarian ghost traces haiku” – lovely imagery.
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Thank you, Shaun.
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Excellent imagery in this, Kim. I love the photo you paired it with.
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Thank you kindly, Sara.
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