In March or April, between the trees,
ears like streamers in the breeze,
striding with their long legs
in enigmatic zig-zags,
sparring and boxing as they go,
ardent bucks and exhausted does.
They’re creatures of air, spirits of spring, you say,
shadowy bookends to the working day.
But in in a late summer light circus,
when shadows move in and out of focus,
from my hide of long grass I notice, unaware that I am there,
a large-eared hare
lolling in the meadow, nose twitching
whiskers trembling.
With lopsided gait it breaks into a run,
burnished fur gleaming in the sun.
Kim M. Russell, 20th April 2026

On the 20th day, we’re two thirds of the way through NaPoWriMo and April is going so fast! The optional prompt today starts by reading ‘Black Swan on Water’ by Carl Phillips, which consists of a single sentence, and the three-line stanzas mimic the ‘braids in water’ in the penultimate line. Furthermore, “the way the lines get longer and longer makes the poem as a whole look a bit like the widening wake that a swan leaves as it swims.”
Our challenge is to write a poem that uses an animal that shows up in myths and legends as a metaphor for some aspect of a contemporary person’s life, including one spoken phrase.
I’ve written several poems about hares before – I love to spot them when I’m out and about – so I took a few lines from a couple of them and created a new one.
Also linked to dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Night on 7th May 2026.
This is so beautiful, Kim. I loved the imagery and that last line makes it all comes alive. I had no idea of the quote about hares being ‘shadowy bookends to the working day’. I read the poem twice and the second time made it even more beautiful.
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Thank you so much, Smitha!
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I do love to see the hares but I have never seen them so intense in March… but they are quite common in our neighborhood.
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They love the open fields around here.
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Loved it in NAPOWRIMO; love it here! From sparring and boxing and striding to lolling and trembling….even hares can lose their energy after a long day! 🙂
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Thanks so much Lill!
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This is absolutely stunning, Kim! 😀 I especially admire; “They’re creatures of air, spirits of spring, you say, shadowy bookends to the working day.” Yes. ❤️❤️
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Thank you, Sanaa. ❤❤
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This precious, Kim.
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Thank you, Ken.
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Great use of rhyming couplets. I do adore a good rhyme. I haven’t seen many around here yet. I saw one on my walk last week.
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Thank you so much, Truedessa.
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This is a lovely poem, nice rhythm and rhyme. The first six lines pulled me into the poem. We enjoyed watching a litter of bunnies in our backyard this year.
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Thank you, Ronald.
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Your poem certainly captures the prancing nature of these creatures. Well done.
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I’m glad you like it.
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Such a beautiful poem and the photo of the hares is also great.
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Thank you very much, Reelika.
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Long lines breaking into the shorter indented line are a good mimicry of these furtive companions helping themsleves to our gardens.
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Thank you, Brendan.
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A great poem, Kim. They are so much fun to watch trying to hide in plain sight!
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Thanks Dwight!
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Nice to see them running and chasing among themselves and hiding from humans. Great rhyming Kim!
Hank
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Thank you, Hank!
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How gently you describe such a boisterous animal!
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Thank you, Jae!
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