i use words like beads to tell
the stories that haunt me
they are strung on shadows of what
i know is
poetry and the gist of it
while you
sit and plan
each word and line to
an accurate death that’s what you do
killing your words with
the sharpness of your
newspaper prose while I am the one
who lets words run wild
like birds or butterflies and
lets them be as precious
as life
Kim M. Russell, 9th June 2026

It’s Tuesday and Melissa is our Poetics host at the dVerse Poets Pub, where we are writing unpunctuated poems.
Melissa asks: ‘How often do we stop to think about the system of symbols we use in written language to denote where sentences end, separate clauses, change inflection, and so on?. I am speaking of: punctuation.’
She reminds us that poets ‘have long been creating form, meaning, and rhythm without using any punctuation at all’ and gives us examples by W. S. Merwin, Gertrude Stein and, of course, e. e. cummings.
For today’s prompt, we are having fun sans punctuation. We may capitalize lines, write in all lowercase, rhyme (or not), use enjambment or unique spacing, whatever other tools we use are completely up to us – only our poems must not be punctuated.
I have taken the final lines from the Mary Oliver poem ‘The Summer Day’ to create a golden shovel:
“Tell me, what is it you plan to do
With your one wild and precious life?”
the freedom of the poem’s structure exemplifies the message in such wonderful wordsmithing:
“killing your words with
the sharpness of your
newspaper prose ”
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Thank you, Laura.
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“words as precious as life”, luv that
much love
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Thank you, Gillena. I’ll be over to read yours in the morning.
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I love that you used Mary Oliver’s lines to create a golden shovel, Kim! And especially
“that’s what you do
killing your words with
the sharpness of your
newspaper prose while I am the one
who lets words run wild”
As they should be! Wild and free, as precious as life.
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Thank you, Melissa! Enjoy your holiday and quality time with the children!
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I especially love your parting line – words should always be a pleasure- Jae
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Thanks so much, Jae!
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i so admire your golden shovel scooped from that wonderful quote
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Thankyou so much, Lynn!
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Very nicely done, Kim!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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oh to run with those wild words! brilliant, kim. top notch poem, this
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Thank you kindly, Eric!
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Fly free little words! Fly Free!! 😁
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😊
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This is excellent Kim! 👏 The formatting and golden shovel bonus are exceptional. I believe I may be a word killer in this world!
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Thank you very much, Shaun!
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What a stunning golden shovel Kim just brilliant 🙌💜
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Thanks so much, Ange! 💕
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I really enjoyed the way the Golden Shovel flowed back and forth so freely, Kim, as well as the sentiment you espoused…
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Thank you very much, Andrew.,
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Wonderful ♥️
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Excellent, every line of it.
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Thank you very much, Maggie.
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i really like the comparison with birds and butterflies! Nicely done, Kim.
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Thank you, Jay!
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Wow! From start to finish brilliant and then I see it’s also a shovel poem. So very cool.
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful write, Kim! Loved that killa last lines, “I am the one
who lets words run wild
like birds or butterflies and
lets them be as precious
as life!!!! 🩵🙏🩵
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Thank you, Cara!
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Such a lovely golden shovel that flowed so freely and beautifully, Kim.
“killing your words with the sharpness of your newspaper prose” made me chuckle, especially because you juxtaposed it with this brilliant line, ” while I am the one
who lets words run wild
like birds or butterflies and
lets them be as precious
as life”
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Thanks so much, Punam!
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My pleasure, Kim.
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Gorgeous! A new favorite. This prompt suits you!
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Thank you so much, Jennifer!
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I love the “newspaper prose”. Excellent poem, Kim!
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Thank you, Sarah!
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