My response to Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #25 The Technique of Narrowing Focus
Crowded winter copse
lattice of leaveless branches
one sturdy trunk
© Kim M. Russell, 2015
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Lovely! And I see we’ve got a similar tree, how extraordinary!
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perfect
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Thank you 🙂
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Oh, I could see the V here, I had to look up copse though, LOL! Then I see it was in the poem itself. Lovely:)
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Thank you 🙂
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I love that you choe to write about a tree. The tree has all three elements in the technique! Brilliant.
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Wonderful haiku Kim … as writersdream says “the tree has all narrowing focus”
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Thank you! Wishing you love and peace in 2016.
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