My response to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Photo Challenge # 96
Cellblock by Steve Snodgrass CC BY 2.0
Echoing of keys
Locks, bolts, bars and naked light
Bulb swings acid bright
Only shadows deep within
Cloud the pain and hide the sin
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
writing in north norfolk 
The brevity and abruptness of your words make me think of the clanging and other sounds in a prison! Very well written.
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Thank you! It’s not from personal experience😊
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LOl. I didn’t think so.
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spooky cool!
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😊
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Thanks Kim for this powerfully written and evocative response to the MLMM Photo Challenge.
Your Tanka seems to have captured an essence and ambiance as hinted at in the image – words sounding out – echoing in the metal …. really lovely.
Cheers~Pat
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Thanks, Pat.
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This is a splendid poet … really great stream of consciousness .. I enjoyed it very much!
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Thank you:)
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