My first attempt at a cascading haiku in reposnse to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille “moonlight”
purest silver light
cascades into darkest night
heaven’s lantern
heaven’s lantern
constant but drawn by the tide
fades into black
fades into black
from a smiling face
to a winking eye
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
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writing in north norfolk 
love the line – heaven’s lantern. nicely done.
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Thank you, Candy.
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I like the transition from smiling face to winking eye.
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winking eye is what touched me…My dad had the sexiest wink and this music reminds me of my parents dancing.
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🙂
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Nice cascading haiku Kim.
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🙂
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A beautiful and original poem !
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Thank you, Virginia!
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The image compliments the words perfectly.
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Thanks!
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Ah, that flirtatious moon! Beautiful cascade.
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Thank you, Charley!
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The repetition of the Cascade plays so well with this! ‘Fades into black Fades into black’ – like a well-timed echo. (Must give the form a try!)
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Thank you, Jilly. I look forward to reading yours.
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