My response to dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Night # 167 – a poem I wrote and posted last September, that kind of sums up my writing.
The scratching of the pen
Won’t stop
It echoes through my dreams
And lifts my eyelids
With the urgency
Of birth
Ideas invade
Exploding crocuses
That reach out
For an inkling of light
But
Shadows shackle me
To sleep
Draw me back down
Below the surface
Until the poem
Remains a scribble
On my soul
© Kim M. Russell, 2015
Love the thought of those exploding crocuses…
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I feel replete after reading this. Very satisfying 😊
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Thank you, Jacqui 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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Nice expression.
Hope all poems get expressed, rather than ending as scribbles 🙂
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I tend to post scribbles on the blog and then develop them into poetry for submission.
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Despite the shadows, we need to let those words out ~ I admire the imagery of exploding crocuses ~
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🙂
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Oh that those ideas that seek expression in the middle of the night could find their way into poetry. Hopefully the words which are ‘scribbles on the soul’ will find their way……
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This is absolutely stunning to read out loud.. 😀
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The exploding crocus made my mind explode in color! Beautiful!
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome.
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…remains a scribble. Nice.
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I read your piece and felt like hearing my own thoughts – lovely. Welcome to OLN and thanks for joining us.
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Thank you, Abhra. I’m really happy to have found the Poets Pub and looking forward to the next challenge/prompt.
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Of course – OLN is an open prompt..I hope you will like our other theme based prompts too.
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“scribbles on the soul” are surely where poems are born! Nicely expressed, Kim!
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Thank you for your kind comment. Much appreicated 🙂
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Yes.. for me that sweet spot..
somewHeRe between alpha
and theta waves oF
wake and sleep..
wheRe ideas
sPring a
germinating
from sEEds oF
day dReAmS waves..
oh nO.. eYes cloSe..
Sandman callS
asleep
again..
poeTry
fades
iN
pilLoway..:)
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I love that word ‘pilloway’!
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SMiLes.. In feathered travel..:)
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