My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads A Poem of Our Own
Once upon a time I was a teenage girl
Every night
Chasing poems in my dreams
Every day
Living in my own shadow
Painting a self-portrait by numbers
With a life of its own
Until I let it go
Became me
And
Instead of chasing poetry
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
Powerful final lines. Poetry has found you. And love the lines:
‘Living in my own shadow
Painting a self-portrait by numbers’
Beautiful.
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Thank you, Gemma 😊
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Ah, this made me smile. A wise older friend told me long ago, ‘Don’t chase the poetry; let it find you.’
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😊
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Such powerful and heartfelt lines Kim 😀
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Such a beautiful portrait of your transition, love it,,
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Painting a self-portrait by numbers.
What an excellent analogy!
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Thank you, Kerry!
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Oh I love this.. to be found by poetry… why search when it’s looking at you?
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😁
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I so love that poetry grows with the speaker. And sight of a soul being “scribbled” on is a wonderful things to behold. ♥
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If we wait, poetry will come. Thank you for reminding me.
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Oooooh. Kim, I love the idea of poetry find YOU, instead of vice-versa. I was that girl, too. 😉
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It’s something you can only learn with age. When young, I wanted to experience everything, write about everything, go everywhere. Now I let it come to me, even when lying in bed with a chest infection. I have to get up and go out tomorrow, so I’m hoping a day in bed will set me up for Monday morning. 😮
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LOVE your closing line!!
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A lovely way to put it!
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Oh, I LOVE this….every line.
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Thank you so much 🙂 I’m putting together a poetry pamphlet and thinking of calling it Becoming a Poet and putting this in as the first poem.
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Love this, especially those last two lines. Would have loved the poem titles to have hyperlinks so I could read the poems you referenced because now my curiosity is piqued 🙂
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I can edit the poem and include hyperlinks to save you scrolling down the menu to find them 🙂
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Done!
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Thank you……heading over to read them now 🙂
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🙂
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Very well penned!💕
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Thank you kindly 🙂
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