Mask of clay,
damp, lumpen and grey,
fills mouth, eyes, ears
and wrinkles
as it seeps into skin.
Thrown on a nightmare wheel,
it permits the dusty bogeyman
to poke holes in dreams,
fill them with ceramic screams.
Hands wet
with pulling
and squeezing sweat,
you mould the lump of clay
into your own face.
Kim M. Russell, 2016
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Flash 55 PLUS!
Kerry is the host for the Flash 55 Challenge, in which she asks us to write a piece of poetry or prose on a subject of our choice in precisely 55 WORDS.
For the OPTIONAL EXTRA part of this challenge, she has invited us to watch a short clip from the movie, Samsara, conceived and directed by Ron Fricke. This clip features performance artist, Olivier de Sagazan. Saṃsāra is a Sanskrit word that means “wandering” or “world”, with the connotation of cyclic, circuitous change.
Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Thank you for sharing my poetry!
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That second stanza is truly inspired. Really well-conceived.
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Thanks Kerry!
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Thrown on a nightmare wheel,
it permits the dusty bogeyman
to poke holes in dreams,
fill them with ceramic screams.
You evoke such spine chilling imagery, Kim! Kudos!
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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There is something terrifying and powerful in the idea of making oneself into a nightmare bogeyman. What is the protagonist’s role in submitting to the horror they have become?
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The protagonist would have to enjoy the horror to undertake the transformation, I think. Thank you for reading and commenting, Rommy!
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The ceramic screams in particular is so well chosen for this amazing poem.
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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I find this piece deliriously enchanting, it is honest, and cruel at the same time.
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Thank you, Oloriel!
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The last stanza digs right into the bone and squeezes all sorts of emotions. It feels physical.
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Your artistic poetic challenge of this artist is amazing and purely magic. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Charlie!
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You are welcome. 🙂
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🙂
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That was amazing. The accompanying video was very disturbing, but in a good way.
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Thanks! When I first saw the video, I was completely mesmerised. I love that kind of thing.
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Thrown on a nightmare wheel,
it permits the dusty bogeyman
to poke holes in dreams,
fill them with ceramic screams.—amazing!
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Thank you, Sree!
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Very fascinating experiences.
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Did you watch the video? I thought it was refreshingly horrific – nothing seems to scare me these days, except real life stuff and the news, and this got some way to doing just that. 🙂
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