At the beginning of December
your first year was over;
you had found your feet,
unsteady as yet
but eager to make
a quick escape.
You wanted to chase flakes
that fell from the sky,
fluttered on your eye lashes
and kissed your cheeks,
even after a week
when snow rose to the roof,
icicles hung from the ceiling
and frost left its breath
inside the windows.
As soon as I stood you
in those shiny red Wellington boots,
too big for your tiny toes,
you loved them,
holding you steady in the snow,
bright against the blanket of white
covering the garden, marked only
by the secret words
left by birds.
Kim M. Russell, 8th December 2016
My response to Imaginary Garden with real Toads: Bits of Inspiration ~ Shoes
Today Susie has been sitting at her computer contemplating shoes, for which, she says, she has inherited her mother’s passion. There are many reasons why we choose our shoes: athletics, dress, work, vanity; and, if we looked at our collections of shoes, we would remember where and why we bought each pair. She has also shared two inspiring poems about shoes. The challenge is to write about shoes. It could be a favourite pair, hated pair, father’s shoes, mother’s shoes. We should go wherever our shoes take us, as long as the poem is a new one.
Also linked to dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Live on 9th December 2023
Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Thank you!
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You wanted to chase flakes that fell from the sky,
fluttered on your eye lashes and kissed your cheeks,
even after a week when snow rose to the roof,
icicles hung from the ceiling and frost left its breath
inside the windows.
Sigh..❤️ the images woven here are to die for! Beautifully penned!
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Thank you, Sanaa- I’m so pleased you like it! Love Kim xxx
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“those shiny red Wellington boots” against a backdrop of snowy white…. wonderful
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Thanks!
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Lovely
Have a good Thursday
Much love…
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You too, Gillena! Thanks for reading!
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I love the secret words left by birds! Such a tender portrait of a child – it says much of the mother too.
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Thank you, Kerry. They were hard times when we lived in the middle of nowhere in Ireland but my daughter made me happy.
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What a beautiful tale! Love the tender feelings.
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Thank you, Teresa!
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beautiful – reminded me of my little grandson’s first pair of red gumboots. He is grown-up now, and a father himself, but the memory remains.
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🙂
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This brought a smile.
coal (Fireblossom)
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I’m happy I made you smile 🙂
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This is just precious Kim!
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Thank you, Candy!
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Love the joy that shines out of the words, the contrast between the colors, the celebration in the end… What a delightful slice of memory. 🙂
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Thanks Magaly! 🙂
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Magnificent. Delicate as a snowflake forever held in memory. Red Wellingtons shine through.
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Thank you, Brendan!
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Lovely, what a great memory of childhood and the brightness of those wellies
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Thank you, Bjorn! Have a great weekend!
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I knew I had read it before, and I did love hearing you reading it yesterday.
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Poems that bring back so many warm, beautiful, precious memories are special ~ your poem certainly did.
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Thanks for reading, Helen, and I’m so pleased you enjoyed it.
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Marvelous!
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🙂
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Can we just say Wellies instead of Wellington? It’s just well & good, as is your poem:)
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Thank you! 🙂
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I’m soft for Wellington, as my daughter travels to Wellington, NZ in 60 days!
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😊
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What a beautiful memory. I bet they were magic boots. 😉 Thank you so much for this lovely contribution to the prompt.
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Thank you for reading, Susie!
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Such rich imagery used. This poem has such a beautiful innocence to it.
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Thank you so much!
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Lovely imagery throughout! Thanks for sharing this heart-touching poem.
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Thank you, Jay!
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Beautiful poem, you painted such a warm and emotional scene in my mind with it. I love the part that describes the desire to chase the flakes!
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Thank you!
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It was amazing to hear you read this poem today, Kim. I keep seeing those tiny red wellies supporting a little girl with snowflakes on her eyelashes. Such lovely imagery!
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Thanks so much, Colleen!
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Lovely memories, beautifully told KIm – there is much I renated here with from raising my own and helping to raise my young grandkids – great to have such memories refreshed in this way – thank you….
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Cheers Scott.
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Kim, I feel sure this poem is about your first grandchild. Rich, loving imagery. I can see the little red boots against the tall snow. Beautiful poem ❤
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Thank you, Lisa. It’s about my daughter, 42 years ago.
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Awwwww even more precious ❤
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Such a delightful memory beautifully written. As crisp as the snow and vibrant as those red wellies. I loved hearing you read it, Kim. 🙂
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Thank you Dianne. It was lovely to see and hear you at OLN live. Only one more week and we break up for a two-week holiday. I look forward to more poetry before the break. See you on the poetry trail soon! 😊
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Hi Kim — I’ve really enjoyed the OLN Live Thursdays, sorry to hear they’re going away. Reading and contributing to the poetry of the d’verse online community has been wonderful, and I hope I am able to in the new year… it is my intention — when possible. Kathy comes home this Wednesday, and it appears we will be rejoining her battle, so my writing may be less frequent into the future — we will see what presents itself, as I am also dealing with my own issues. This is my 20th year posting poetry online, across a number of wonderful organized sites… and it is a joy I will not allow myself to completely abandon. I am sending this message to those in this dVerse community to whom I am most drawn, and who have shown me consistent kindness. Happy holiday to you my friend. You are a pleasure to read. ✌🏼🫶🏼
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Thank you so much, Rob. I wish you and Kathy a wonderful Christmas, and I hope the New Year brings you joy and good health. I look forward to reading more of your poetry soon.
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You write the child’s fascination and glee with snow in this poem that serves as wellingtons for the reader. Tromping along. (And ah, such fond memories of Real Toads…)
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Thanks Brendan. I miss the Toads too.
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Those shiny, red boots, the snow, the child, and “the secret words
left by birds”–how could I not love this poem, Kim? It’s so evocative.
It makes me remember my daughter, younger child, in rain boots splashing in the puddles.
I hope you’ve shared this one with your daughter. 💙
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Thank you, Merril! I think she’s seen it but I’ll send her a link now that you’ve reminded me, seeing as it’s an old poem.
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You’re welcome, Kim. 😊
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I can just picture this tender memory with the red boots and snow falling. Beautiful.
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Thank you, Ali!
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This is so sweet, Kim. I especially love the second stanza, and “the secret words
left by birds.”
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Thank you, Melissa. I remember how the snow was so deep and untouched that the bird prints really stood out!
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