with a humble stone
we can grind grains to make bread
or finish a wall
leaving clouds to do their job:
gather rain, then let it fall
Kim M. Russell, 2017
Image of woman grinding grain found on Pinterest
My response to Carpe Diem #1169 humble
In this episode Chèvrefeuille has shared another poem by the Persian poet Hafiz, entitled: ‘from the large jug, drink’:
From the large jug, drink the wine of Unity,
So that from your heart you can wash away the futility of life’s grief.
But like this large jug, still keep the heart expansive.
Why would you want to keep the heart captive, like an unopened bottle
of wine?
With your mouth full of wine, you are selfless
And will never boast of your own abilities again.
Be like the humble stone at your feet rather than striving to be like a
Sublime cloud: the more you mix colors of deceit, the more colorless
your ragged wet coat will get.
Connect the heart to the wine, so that it has body,
Then cut off the neck of hypocrisy and piety of this new man.
Be like Hafiz: Get up and make an effort. Don’t lie around like a bum.
He who throws himself at the Beloved’s feet is like a workhorse and will
be rewarded with boundless pastures and eternal rest.
© Hafiz – From: Drunk on the Wine of the Beloved (Tr. Thomas Rain Crowe)
I like the manner you used the two elements : stone and clouds in your tanka !
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Thank you, Virginia!
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… and rain needed to get grain …cirkel closed 😉
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🙂
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This is superb. There is a moment of meditation for the reader after reading this.
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Thank you so much, Hamish!
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superbly worded, kim.
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Thank you, Eric!
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Very nice ! left with my thoughts….
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Thank you, Nicole!
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Many-layered: many harvests gathered. A non-linear time-line between planting and harvesting and what has to happen for it all to be possible. Loved it!
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Thank you!
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This is very profound. I am still thinking of the layers of meaning you have captured here.
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Thanks Suzanne!
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Marvelous x 2 🌹🌹
Brilliant. Beautiful Hafiz poem also. 🌹
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