What has been imprisoned under the lawn all winter?
Frozen mud, rendered malleable
by spring warmth, releases
rusty skeletons of ginger bud cases,
last spring’s copper fairy lights.
Stones and flint jingle underfoot,
sigh a heavy scent from crumbly lumps
of black earth, exuding worms from clumps,
evicting glossy beetles from ivy
tangled in the willow, bowed
by months of wind and rain,
happy to feel its roots again.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics – Soil (posted early due to having to go off-line for a few days)
Björn is our host today and he wants us to write poetry about soil, where we come from and what we’ll become: “Ashes to ashes and dust to dust”. He says that he loves and hates the scent of mulch; loves growth and fears decay; loves to walk barefoot in warm dirt, but afterwards he washes his feet. Soil gives grain for bread, but when the weather fails we die of hunger: it’s friend and foe.
There are many synonyms for soil: mulch and compost, dirt and grime, earth and ground: all reflect the soil and various values we attribute to its worth. Soil can be a metaphor for land and country, home and nations, war and peace, and for the roots of trees.
Björn asks us to taste the soil or bite the dust and bring him poetry from what we sense in soil; to be gravediggers, gardeners or the soil of our origins.
Love this. It’s exactly this, assuming you got all your leaves up last fall. 🙂
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Wow, the suddenly-revealed richness of what had seemed inert and barren in winter!
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Everything is coming alive again!
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‘Stones and flint jingle underfoot, sigh a heavy scent from crumbly lumps’ sigh this is such a powerful image!
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Oh yes I can empathize with your soil imprisonment, Our Rainy Season should start in June, and the Caladiums will (like magic) push out from below
much love…
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🙂
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I love the first line. It leaves the mind blooming with possibilities, which the rest of your poem delivers.
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A very colorful, savvy portrait! 🌹😎
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Only when you live in a colder climate can you see how winter is like a prison…. almost like summer is a brief interlude.
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Imprisoned is a good way to look at winter or even a time for sleep.
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I like your analogy of the winter soil as a sort of landscape mirroring the urban one, full of junk and useless bits and pieces until the magic of spring sets the life forces in motion.
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I love the sense of burgeoning activity in this poem!
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What a perfect metaphoric write. Can wait to get outside and set things free.
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Yime for things imprisoned to push up through the soil! Nicely drawn.
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* Time, that is!
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I love how you described spring and soil…so very true with the long winter we have had so much locked in to prison of ice/frost/snow. Truly, a lovely read! Cheryl-Lynn
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Thank you, Cheryl-Lynn.
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Love the slow reveal of nature you present us with here .. and that phrase ‘flint jingle’ .. wonderful!
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Thank you!
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I can see that so much of my stuff has been imprisoned by winter, yikes ~ Love that creatures can go back to the black earth and feel its roots again ~
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“evicting glossy beetles” – beautiful line!
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Thank you, Jilly!
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I feel bad for the willow, luckily she is flexible and survives as do other creatures through the seasons.
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She is green and thriving!
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I love the way you began this poem, Kim.
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Thank you, Sara!
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a garden of such delight, things coming to life, left sleeping for so long, what activity we don’t see Kim!
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Thank you, Gina! My willow has found her feet and looking wonderfully green.
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“by months of wind and rain,
happy to feel its roots again.”
~ah, beautifully penned. ❤
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Thank you, Maria!
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Thoughts of soil…and the life that lives there.
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I like the grittiness of the black soil and how you captured it in this poem. Bonus on the Alice in Chains song, I’ve always loved them.
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I enjoyed reading this. It’s a very Vivid description what happens in the yard with the season’s change.
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Thank you, Justin.
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it is a truly delicious poem but crumbly lumps just had me ‘wowing’
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Thank you, Paul!
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Fantastic write! I can smell the damp soil.
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Thank you, Delaina.
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Northern Hemisphere Winters do create a prison for the soil. No doubt it breeds endurance.
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The imagery and sensory descriptions are so clear and real. Thank you!
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Thank you for reading and commenting!
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This poem is exactly like spring, unfolding!
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Thank you, Mary!
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