In German,
Gift means poison,
something he may not know.
He brings her gold,
perfume and clothes,
sometimes a diamond,
sometimes a rose,
until she doesn’t even see them
piling up in lonely high security,
the toxic perfection of their mansion.
So she searches on the internet
for something that she cannot get
from him – the comfort that loving words impart
and the gift of someone’s heart.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
Image found on Pinterest
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Tuesday Poetics – Wrap it in Ribbons Please!
This week Lillian has returned to tend the bar and starts by asking us to relax and let our minds wander, and then rein them in to recall a time when we received a gift. She asks whether it was wrapped in holiday paper and did someone deliver it to our door. Did we turn a corner and run into an old friend we hadn’t seen in years? Did we find out we were going to become parents, grandparents, aunts or uncles? Did we score the winning points in the last seconds of a game? Did we find a scribbled “I luv you” note stuck on the refrigerator? Did we hear a symphony with a dramatic crescendo that sent your heart soaring?
She says that there are so many gifts when we think about it: someone in the family with the gift of the gab or a special power or aptitude. Have we given a charitable gift or presented someone with a gift? Is there a difference between a gift of homemade jam, a gift certificate for $100, or a bracelet from a store? What makes a good gift?
Lillian has shared some inspirational quotations about gifts; my favourite is by Mary Oliver: “Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.”
She has also provided a link to a Shaker Song, “Simple Gifts.” Originally written in 1848 by Elder Joseph Brackett, the Aaron Copeland arrangement is quite well known. This recording, sung by Seattle’s Tudor Choir, was arranged by composer and Professor at Boston Conservatory, Kevin Siegfried.
Today’s prompt: write a poem that includes the word gift.
So beautifully writ with an image that adds much. A gift of the heart —- invaluable.
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Well I learned something new today Kim ~ And that gift of the heart is priceless, don’t where we can buy it anywhere, smiles ~
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Gift actually means poison in Swedish as well… and i really love how it brought you that gilded cage…
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It’s a Germanic word! Tack tack, Björn!
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And poison has to be latin given what it’s named in French 🙂
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It is! I think gift sounds more dangerous than poison, which sounds sly to me.
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The gift of the heart is to be cherished!!!
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Beautifully written Kim, ‘the comfort that loving words impart and the gift of someone’s heart’ are the greatest gifts that money could never buy :o) xxx
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Oh, they are Xenia! Thank you! 🙂 xxx
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☺💖 xxx
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Oh I love this. the twist…..and all she wanted all the time was the gifts we should all cherish and experience. I love your description of “toxic perfection.”
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Thank you, Alison. I’m afraid I had to go to bed before I got to your poem, so I’ll be doing that soon.
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Some gifts are worth more than others and may even cost less. Another reminder that not all gifts should be accepted or accepted without caution.
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True!
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This is beautiful!❤️ We must cherish the gift of someone’s heart 🙂
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Yes, we must!
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Poison gift-toxic perfection, the world has a lot of this nonsense going on! I enjoyed this, thanks.
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Thanks for reading!
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Ooooo. I love this. Such a dark and intriguing beginning.
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Thank you, De!
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Loveless life is a poison, whether it’s wrapped in ribbon and lace or not. Possessions cannot guaranty the love of anyone, well written
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Thank you, Walter!
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true and beautiful…
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Thank you, Sumana!
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I like the play on words, the ambiguities and contrasts in this, to end with a profound truth.
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Your words beautifully express what’s really important for our emotional well-being. Well said!
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Really beautiful story. I did not know Gift means poison on German or Swedish as Bjorn pointed out. That’s very interesting indeed. I like how the gifts she receives to her are meaningless. Just things, thins of a ‘poisonous’ nature even though they appear great. I think she hates being stuck in this big house, feels traps and online are her friends, the true gift in her life, what keeps her sane and gives her life authenticity. Great job.
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Thank you so much!
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Of course the giver finds joy in the giving, whether it be love or material goods–but the kicker is when gifts come with conditions & strings, they lose all real value; nice work.
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“…toxic perfection…”. Perfect!
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Thank you, Sarah!
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What an opening to your poem! I like the “something he may not know” line.
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Thank you kindly!
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ToWeRinG Gifts oF GoldeN PoiSoN
Cars as Lovers
Homes as God
BreathE
oF Love
SiNks
STiNk
sTAnK
STuNk
TrumpS.. heHe..
HuMor thE curE
oF FEar and HAte
Tree Stump RiSes
TWig
oF
LioN’s
Love Crier..
NoW.. yeP hi
gHEr.. aGaiN2..;)
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🙂
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Material things will never add up to the gift of a heart which is priceless.
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Interesting…and sad. Made me think of the poison apple gifted to Snow White…a universal theme.
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oh what are the material things without genuine love. such a sad yet so beautifully woven tale.
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An wonderful poem. Tragic and a mesmerizing beauty. The longing for love is always an amazing feeling but not a desirable.
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You perfectly brought out the priceless gift…loved this!
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Thank you, Sreeja!
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Excellent! 🌹🌹🌹🌹😎
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Thanks Dorna!
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Gift me your heart and shall not take it as it’s already taken
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Great read ☺
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Thank you!
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