On the rocky shores
of just after midnight
and well before
wave-break of day,
turnstones tip pebbles,
clatter in my head,
and run across
my shipwrecked bed,
drenched with shadow-spray.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
Image found on rspb.org.uk
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Of Insomnia and Sleep
In today’s prompt, Sanaa has shares a quotation from Marcel Proust: ‘A little insomnia is not without its value in making us appreciate sleep, in throwing a ray of light upon that darkness’ and a poem by Dante Gabriel Rossetti, which she says blew her away, entitled ‘Insomnia’.
Sanaa asks if we have ever found ourselves lying awake in bed at night, waiting for sleep to come, when our brains refuse to shut their mouths. For today’s challenge, she wants us to write a poem about insomnia.
absolutely lovely
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Thank you, Maureen!
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Beautifully penned, Kim!
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Thank you, Vijita!
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Such incredible imagery in this, Kim!❤️ Especially drawn by “turnstones tip pebbles,clatter in my head” sigh.. beautifully executed. Thank you so much for participating!❤️
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Thank you, Sanaa. And thank you for the prompt – I really enjoyed it!
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❤️
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So distinctly you’ve painted your thoughts!
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Thank you!
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That drenched part really sucks.
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Ah, but it’s only shadows…
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absolutely LUV THIS:
“drenched with shadow-spray.”
much love…
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Thank you, Gillena!
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What a fantastic opener:
On the rocky shores
of just after midnight
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Thanks De!
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Love the way your poem goes right for the senses.
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Thanks Magaly!
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Again, such Excellence! 🌹🌹🌹😎
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I can feel myself left on shores like that… a lonely briny place.
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Insomnia is lonely – that’s why we write!
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This poem is a delight and the Ruddy Turnstone capped it off.
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Thank you!
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What a beautiful piece!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome!
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