Sky of robin egg blue
splits; zigzags crack across its shell,
spill sun, a yellow yolk, a glue
uniting buttercup and gorse.
Midas rays riffle ponds and pools,
spark mayfly nymphs that break
the surface like gilded bubbles
in their ghostly mating rituals.
Sunlight joins the dance,
dives into chickweed,
surfaces to gleam
on slippery emerald moss,
then disappears
into a dusk of forest green.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
Images found on Pinterest
A poem for dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Night
What a charming post!
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Thank you very much!
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teeming with life. Are the eggs in the image robin eggs? lovely imagery, reminds me of riverbanks and ponds.
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Yes, they are robin eggs! There was a robin in the garden today. I also found a crushed white egg that fell from the bay tree, which is being removed soon as the roots are threatening the house.
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I liked the sunlight described as “Midas rays”.
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Thank you, Frank!
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Oh, those colours. I love the way you tie them together, like a loose bouquet. Summer pinned to a page.
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Thank you, Sarah! The next couple of weeks are going to be weird – just as I’m finishing my exam marking dVerse breaks up for summer!
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Ah well. We can come back inspired and invigorated. But I like my little routine…
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Me too!
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Split, spark, dive – love the verbs!
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My! I love the colors! Colors upon colors!
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This sparkled with summer!
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Thank you!
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This is the kind of summer I like best… the one that is full of life… what a wonderful way of doing it.
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Thanks Bjorn.
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Midas rays….wonderful. This poem is so full of colors and life! It made me want to go outside and dance but it is too hot right now. I too like my routine but will be making up prompts for Haibun Monday and writing – of course
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Thanks Toni. I haven’t written any haiku for Carpe Diem for a while because of exam marking so I think I’ll be doing some catching up over the next couple of weeks, as well as writing some poems for submission to competitions. I also need to get out for some exercise!
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After spending so much time at the nursing home I find myself restless as well. I used to write for Carpe Diem but found myself not caring for many of the prompts nor for the “haiku” written. I prefer to write my haiku on my own.
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A fantastic song of solstice–brilliant word-smithing pakintikng images, dancing to unheard vibrations; lovely in every way–a honeysuckle embrace for each of our sets of lips, a halcyon hug before the break.
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“Midas rays riffle ponds and pools” The whole poem is wonderful but I especially enjoy the image these words create. Cheers!
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I’m delighted you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and commenting!
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I love this comparison at the beginning of the cracked blue egg and yolk and the cracked blue sky and sun. Also this:
“spark mayfly nymphs that break
the surface like gilded bubbles
in their ghostly mating rituals.”
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Thank you! I so pleased you liked it.
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A song to summer in all it’s glory…and so very much of ‘this’ land. Beautiful.
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full of summer! a lovely addition to the summer poetry, Kim…..eyeful with the colors of summer!
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🌞🌹🌻
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This is beautiful and so serene. I love summer and you’ve captured it wonderfully.
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Thank you, Linda.
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Such good imagery in this poem, Kim. The opening sentence is so good it could stand on its own, though the whole is, of course, a delight.
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Ah you brought back my England. It was like that the first time I saw her – in late April going out to Exeter, past Plymouth, through Taunton and down to Penzance. Yes, the egg opened and the sky thrilled, the gorse had no kissers but it was all kissing me through the window on the train.
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You have made the shades of summer quite magical!
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Gorgeous. ….loved this!!
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Thank you, Sreeja!
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Excellent! 😎😎😎🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Beautiful imagery!
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Thank you!
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