no one hears the waves
as they depart unnoticed
a deserted beach
Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Autumn Retreat 2017 “departure”
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A very good poem. Thanks for sharing!
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Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀
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Thanks Dorna!
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Ah ! That’s what we called – the unbearable lightness of being – !!!
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🙂
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A gorgeous haiku … strong in it’s scene, could have been written by one of the classics.
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Thank you so much, Kristjaan!
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I love this, It reminds me of autumn so much. It is a time where the winds are best for sailing but it is nippy and beaches are so deserted. I do like spending time alone on such a beach though. In another life, I will have a house by the house and will type from the attic my books facing the water:)
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