After the hurly burly of a storm
on uninhabited isles –
green jewels in crystal foam –
a custard wind blows
under the rim of a bluff
clad with cushions of turf
and crowned with rock
shaped like a whale.
This is where stranded
mermaids watch clouds sail
and forests splash and crash
their splendid leafy emerald wash.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
– Ooberxandxdavie6
My response to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Photo Challenge #176 , also linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Oh poor stranded mermaid… it worked so well with the image…
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Thanks Bjorn!
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Lovely imagery……
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Thank you, Sherry!
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I love the notion of stranded mermaids! And thank you for your comment at my place. I adore Dylan, so I’m blushing here.
–coal (Fireblossom)
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This is soo beautiful!❤️ Especially love; “a custard wind blows under the rim of a bluff clad with cushions of turf and crowned with rock shaped like a whale” .. *swoooooon*❤️
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Thanks Sanaa!
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Wow, what stunning imagery you’ve crafted.
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Thanks Jael!
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Welcome.
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beautiful – love that custard wind. Bet it tastes sweet…
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Thank you, Maureen! It probably tastes sweet to the mermaid 😉
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Oh, that mountain mermaid perch! I love this poem. Very imaginative.
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Many thanks Margaret!
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custard wind..that is such an image!!!
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Custard wind comes from the north-east of England – a name for the cold, easterly winds on England’s northeast coast. I suppose it means weather for eating hot custard but in my head I can see yellow splashing wind!
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I saw dense yellow wind too…cold and pasty! Didn’t know it was a real thing..thanks so much for telling me! Didn’t know hot custard was a thing either.. now I must google it and make it 😀
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Custard wind and stranded mermaid – such richness in this poem.
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Thanks Toni. Custard wind is what they call the cold, easterly winds we get on the northeast coast of England. We have some magical words for weather over here!
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You certainly do. I have never heard of custard wind and I have heard quite a few English idioms for weather. I like it muchly.
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Such beautiful words, Kim.
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Thank you, Kerry!
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The sounds, colors, textures and pure yumminess of the last two lines are just perfect!
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Thank you, Magaly!
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Again, such Awesome scenes and feeling expressed! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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Thanks Dorna!
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