Saturday afternoon,
two hours until the train leaves,
the boardwalk springs
under my feet
and the river sports diamonds.
In the stadium at Cardiff Arms Park,
there’s a gathering of voices.
It rises,
echoes like the sea:
the roar of spectators
gathered for rugby.
Kim M. Russell, 2018
Photographs by David Russell
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Quadrille: Shall we gather?
Lillian is our host this Monday and she’s been thinking about the word ‘gather’. She’s shared quotes and various uses of the word, and says that it seems like a good time to gather our thoughts and creative juice to write a quadrille, a poem of exactly 44 words that includes the word ‘gather’ or a form of the word in the body of the poem.
….oh yes……that gathering of rabid fans and the voices that swell up as one and literally ROAR! Well done!
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Thank you, Lill!
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I love this… so much joy and anticipation… alas whenever I see gathering of sports fan I also see the hooligans … hope there are none of that in rugby
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Cricket and rugby fans are better behaved than football fans. I lived in Twickenham for a while so I know what it’s like on match days!
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You’ve captured the sound so precisely with the sea.
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Thanks Jill!
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“The boardwalk springs under my feet” captures the excitement in the air as fans and players alike get ready to face off.
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The boardwalk outside Cardiff Arms Park has an amazing shape, like a boat with a railing and posts that are like masts. It leads to a road and a gate to Cardiff Castle arboretum – a beautiful, peaceful spot, with so much blossom! We could hear the rugby fans from there.
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Nice idea of voices gathering.
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Thank you, Frank.
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A mighty gathering of souls, united by one sport, united in one voice. Wonderful. XX
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🙂 xxx
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We’re deep in rugby country here too. Nothing unites people like a good old rough old team sport. Weird, isn’t it?
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We weren’t even there for the rugby – I was at a GCSE moderation conference. As usual, it finished much earlier than we were told it would so we had time to spare before the train was due. I was amazed at the sound of the crowd drifting from the stadium, along the boardwalk and into the arboretum by Cardiff Castle. What a lovely place that is, full of trees and blossom. – and the castle is impressive too. While I was at the conference, my husband visited the library and Cardiff museum. A couple of years ago he went to the Dr Who exhibition on his own. He loved it but he doesn’t watch Dr Who! He told me all about it, I was dying to go – and it’s closed now!
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That’s a shame! At least you got the trees and the blossom.
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There is nothing like that roar. Primal stuff.
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🙂
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Since the days of the gladiators, the roar is the same! Well written.
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Thank you, Bev!
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Ah, the roar of a crowd at a sporting event is quite unique. You’ve captured the essence of it.
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Thank you, Candy.
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I love the mood of joyous anticipation in your poem!
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Thanks Jo!
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How exciting to wait and watch for those games ~ Love the roar of specatators: It rises,
echoes like the sea:
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Thank you, Grace.
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So evocative!
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🙂
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kaykuala
It rises,
echoes like the sea:
the roar of spectators
One can never forget the roar when a try is converted.
Hank
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I hadn’t heard that roar since moving up to Norfolk from Twickenham.
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I love how the “river sports diamonds.” We got a cool slice of a day in this one.
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I loved watching those river diamonds!
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Ah! I know that heady feeling before a game. You built the tension up pretty well. 🙂
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🙂
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the chorus of those voices makes the stadium shake, so loved how you used the word a gathering of voices, like an amalgamation of energy
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Thank you!
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Oh, I can hear this!
“It rises,
echoes like the sea”
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🙂
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I love how you captured the collective spirit of the roar and the atmosphere before the game – a lovely quadrille Kim 💜 xxx
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Thank you, Xenia! 🙂 xxx
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Great idea for using gather, Kim, and you portray it to perfection.
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Thank you, Victoria.
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I have only seen one live rugby game. Now that is a rough sport! I do enjoy the sound of voices gathered and united.
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I once lived in Twickenham!
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WHoLE
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OnE..:)
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