five fingers on each hand
five finger exercise spans
hard piano keys
to play
her favourite tune
chocolate finger biscuits
licking each finger clean
a wave of fingers
wavering
as she walks away
Kim M. Russell, 2018

My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads NaPoWriMo A list with a twist
Izy’s our host today with an Out of Standard challenge to keep the momentum going as the end of April approaches: a common form called the list poem, with a teeny twist to it just to keep things interesting. She says that a list poem is simply that: a list or inventory of items, people, places, or ideas, often involving repetition. From Walt Whitman to Dr. Seuss, poets have used the list format as a way to break free of traditional expectations.
Our challenge is to write a list poem of five. Five of anything.
I liked it, very sweet! In more ways than one.
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Thank you, Annell!
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I agree with Annell, very sweet.
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😊
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Loved the innocence of this. Excellent!
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Thank you!
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Oh this is beautiful!❤️ I wish I had written this! 😀
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Thank you, Sanaa! 🙂
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Delightful and delicious Kim.
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Thanks Paul!
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You’ve really pulled on some heart strings, here. Loved the balance of observation and imagery. Especially, the small fingers on the hard piano keys. Well done and viva la! Thanks for sharing this one!
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Thank you for the awesome prompt, Izy!
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Sweet scenes of Awesomeness. 😎🥀
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This is so sweet! It reminds me of what my niece does on occasion … 🙂
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🙂
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I think some chocolate on ivory is an acceptable side effect of such cuteness 🙂
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My nan used to get annoyed with my sticky fingerprints all over the piano!
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I like this so much. such innocence and cuteness in one poem should not be allowed!
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Thank you, Toni! I loved tinkling the ivories when I was little.
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☺
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A tasty five poem
Luv the chocolate flavour of it
Much🌼love
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Thanks Gillena. Much love winging its way to you 🌷🌷🌷
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Awe. I took piano lessons and hated them – but how much of that was due to my teacher was my impatient older sister? This was so adorable.
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Thank you, Margaret
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Ah, so many delightful uses for childish fingers!
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kaykuala
Reminds one of KFC’s ‘finger-licking good’
Hank
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That was fun, Kim. Kind of reminds me of my kids when they took piano lessons. I took the at an older age, wouldn’t be chocolate on my fingers.
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You have infused your lines with the beat of piano exercises, great use of repetition and line breaks.
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I so wanted to play Debussy and Chopin but my parents couldn’t afford the lessons.
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Fingers are such versatile things, anything they touch (and how they are marked the it) tells a tale.
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Good choices. A sweet and yummy poem, Kim!
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Thank you, Sara!
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