May is capricious,
the garden is luscious,
bathed in soft sun,
daisy and dandelion-
spattered.
Sky turns bruised plum,
sweetly congeals cloud jam,
a chiff-chaff’s half-hearted call
warning of imminent rainfall.
Warning of imminent rainfall,
a chiff-chaff’s half-hearted call
sweetly congeals cloud jam.
Sky turns bruised plum,
spattered
daisy and dandelion
bathed in soft sun,
the garden is luscious,
May is capricious.
Kim M. Russell, 12th May 2018

My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Weekend Mini Challenge Fussy Little Forms: Palindrome also linked to Poets United Poetry Pantry
Marian is our host this weekend. She says that we all know that a palindrome is a word or phrase that is the same when read forward or backward. Like WOW or CIVIC or LOL or HANNAH. She explains that a palindrome poem can read forward and backward word by word or line by line. She has shared some examples to inspire us to write out own palindrome poems.
Nice!!!
much love…
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Thank you, Gillena!
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This is absolutely breathaking, Kim! 😍 I love “Sky turns bruised plum”… the image alone stirs emotions within💜
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I’m so pleased Yuri like it, Sanaa!
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This is wonderful Wonderful is this!
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Thank you so much, Annell!
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Chiff-chaff and cloud jam…. wonderful!!
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Thank you, Marian!
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Love the plum sky… really wonderful
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Thank you, Bjorn.
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Gorgeous! I loved ‘sky turns bruised plum’.
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Thank you, Jo.
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A lovely ode to May…and yes, the rain did indeed fall.
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kaykuala
bathed in soft sun,
the garden is luscious,
May is capricious.
When the season is unpredictable given all the blessings one is considered lucky to be allowed to participate
Hank
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Today we’ve ha only rain, but the quince and honeysuckle have responded well!
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How skillfully you have created this palindrome poem!
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Thank you so much!
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Your view of May has brightened my mood.
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😊
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I love how May appears and feels for you, capricious though she is.
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Thank you, Robin!
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This is very VERY clever. You mastered the form well and characterized May perfectly!
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Thank you so much, Mary!
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Wonderfully written ! Indeed, May is capricious – caught between some sun and rain.
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Sky turns bruised plum -love that!!!
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An excellent palindrome. So well done!
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Thank you, Sherry!
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For some reason this being to mind the song, It’s May from Camelot. You definitely brightens my day with with this.
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Thank you, Toni.
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Lovely poem!
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Thank you, Ayala!
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Interesting and a very effective form.
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Thank you!
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A wonderful palindrome … your reflections on May working so beautifully with the form – to mesmerizing effect.
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Thank you, Wendy.
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Cleverly done. Lovely images.
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Thank you, Rosemary.
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If art is a mirror held up to nature, palindrome is clearest glass. What difference saying the same thing two ways and saying it twice? In this reflected drop we all go a-Maying.
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😊
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a beautiful picture….fresh feeling!
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Thank you, Sreeja!
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Pretty poem. Kim. Even had loose rhymes, that part must have been hard. It added to the reading, I appreciate your work.
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Thank you kindly, Jim.
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Wow! Great work on this, Kim. I love, ‘daisy and dandelion-
spattered’.
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Thank you, Sara!
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