It’s the geometric symphony
of angles and circles,
a breath of speed and freedom
through seasons and cycles:
a shiny metal frame,
the acrid rubber smell
of tyres and pedals,
whistle of wind,
zip of wheel on road
and the jingle of the bell.
Kim M. Russell, 18th June 2018

I’m looking after the dVerse Poets Pub today for the Quadrille, when we take any meaning of one word and transform it into 44 poetic words. The word I’ve chosen is ‘cycle’. Come and join us at the virtual bar; we’re always glad to see you and you can bring your bicycle with you!
Oh I love the joyfulness of your ride… and all the senses there…
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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Well that was unexpected: you used “cycle” in a poem about riding a bicycle! Tis the season for such exhilaration.
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🙂
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What happiness exudes from your poem, especially the sound of that bell!
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Thanks Toni 🙂 I’m looking forward to getting on my bike and ringing the bell – just as soon as my husband retrieves it from the shed!
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What fun! I have never ridden a bicycle before but to me, it seems like flying.
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You should try it!
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I love the joyous tone of your piece!
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Thank you, Jo! I will be even more joyous when my bicycle is out of our shed. I can’t get to it. 😉
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Although I don’t have a bell on my bicycle, hearing the jingle is what I think the music of a bicycle should sound like.
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What do you have on your bike, Frank? I love the bell but I think a horn would be fun too!
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I actually use my mouth saying “On your left” or “On your right”. But some do use bells to alert me when I’m walking that they are coming up from behind. Horns would be nice.
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What a joyful ride!
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Thank you, Jane!
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Such a gorgeously atmospheric write, Kim! 😍😍
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Thank you, Sanaa! 🙂
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The title drew me in and I enjoyed the ride! The jingle of the bell just made me smile.
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Thank you, Candy 😉
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All the joy of every ride in so few lines! Wonderful write, Kim! 🙂
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Thanks Frank! 🙂
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This is wonderful.
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Thank you so much!
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I love this! I wish I had a bike again!
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Mine is stuck in the shed!
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Yes, it really is like making music combining all the sounds!
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Thank you, Kathy!
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What a symphony this is, with that delightful jingle of the bell ~
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Thank you, Grace!
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ching ching!
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Your poem does give me a sense of being there with you; “the acrid rubber smell of tyres and pedals,
whistle of wind, zip of wheel on road and the jingle of the bell.” It goes well with the picture
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Thank you, Mark!
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Thank You for such a thoughtful prompt Kim. I never even thought of Summer, bicycles etc.
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A very sensory ride. Well done.
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Loved your great description of the bicycle and the ride. No freedom like sailing down the road on a bicycle.
Dwight
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Thank you, Dwight!
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Love the poem and that photo. Only, I envisioned that one with the out stretched legs on an adult TRIcycle since I was a whimp and never learned how to ride a 2 wheeler, lol!!
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It’s one of my favourite photographic prints and has been on my wall for over twenty five years. I love the freedom in it, as well as the fashion.
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Freedom and exhilaration. Love the photo match too. :))
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Thank you Jo-Anne!
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Reminded me of childhood freedoms. Cycling under my own steam, widening my horizons.
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Once my bike is out of the shed, I hope to get my cycling freedom again!
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oo, the jingle of the bell!
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kaykuala
of tyres and pedals,
whistle of wind,
zip of wheel on road
and the jingle of the bell
Back to the innocence of the young days of old!
Hank
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Yes, that little bell, a sweet reminder.
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I like jingly bells. I have earrings that jingle!
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“a breath of speed and freedom” This line resonates throughtout
much love…
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I can hear it!
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A beautiful ride Kim, your ‘whistle of wind, zip of wheel on road’ brings back happy memories from cycling around a much flatter country! :o) xxx
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Thank you, Xenia. The Norfolk landscape is very similar to the Dutch one – it’s flat, we have windmills, dykes and fens too!
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🙂💖 xxx
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I love to be reminded of the musicality of everyday sounds- very nice! Love that photo, too!
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Thank you!
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Such unbridled joy in this–and that photo is fabulous!
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Thank you, Merril!
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An exhilarating ride!
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Thanks Viv!
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Cycles Are Scary when
Perfect for they mean
Perfection
aS oNly
Machines
WiLL Be when
Programmed with
No FaiL.. aH.. A Beauty Organic
oF Change ImPerfect DreAMS
CycLeD DiFFeReNT NoW to Be
iNstead oF
NoT to:
be for
From: if origin
oF ANti Matter
And Matter were are is am thenow
Perfectly BaLaNCinG ToGeTHeR
CaNCeLinG oUT aLL Forever No thing..
No Cycles aT aLL WiLL CoME AnD Go NoW..:)
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Have you every read The Third Policeman by Flann O’brien, a comic story in which a theory was put forward that the longer a person rides a bike, the more bicycle they become due to the jiggling of atoms?!
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Hi Kim.. thanks for turning me onto the Post
Modern Analogy and somewhat critique
on Irish Culture from the eyes of
the Author of the “Third
Policeman” and
considering
i live in a place
LA Lower Alabama also
known as the Panhandle
State of Flowers Florida
where the Most Beautiful
Beaches are roamed by Half
Naked Very Healthy and Beautiful
Humans just 20 Miles Due South where i live
And 80 Percent of the Folks Here Voted for Trump
And Still Support HiS Way of Doing Politics i Find ‘it’ increasingly
hard to believe that these folks still see an all Loving God Who Creates
Hell to torture 80 Percent or more of that God’s Creation forever when
NoW is forever NoW
And it’s more
obvious
than
ever
that the Devil
and Hell and Angels
and Heaven are more than
capable of existing all on tHeir
own as co-creations of reality now..
As far as Self-Actualization goes in Hell
One Just Dances and Shut the Trumps out..
Oh and Don’t forget the Song in Writing one’s
Own Narrative Straight out of Hell and the Trump Territory too..
It’s not that ‘they’ have low standard IQ the problem most definitely
is A Matthew Chapter 5 Verses 3 through 11 Deficit of the Emotional
Intelligence NoW of SpiRiT oF heART And MiNd and BoDy BaLaNCinG
SoUL that is As iSReal as Naked Folks Dancing Together on the Beach..
i’d ‘run’ for
‘office’ but
a Real Jesus
(Knees Okay for dance)
as far as Love incarnate
goes wouldn’t even be noticed.. hehe..
And that’s my Current Literary Project
Dancing a ‘Praise Dance’ 10K Miles in the
Back to the Future Version WHere Biff is President
as i don’t do Skate Boarding and Writing a 6 Million
Word Longest Bible and Long Form Poem in the length
of 58 Months too as i reached age 58 on my Birthday from
A Magnificent Day of SiXeS on 6.6.60.. anyWay it wouldn’t
Matter even if i was Jesus.. heHe.. for ‘they’ would call me
the Devil just for my Birthdate with all those 6 LooKinG GoLDeN
Spiral PHI Numbers on my Driver’s License Side by Side but as far
as Third Policemen go.. i do tend to like the Good Cop Version of the
5 Foot 1 or so 106 LB or so Brown Shortly Cropped Hair Real version of
whoEver thE Anonymous Authors and Innumerable Copy Scribes Created
Through the Centuries Changing the Text by Mistake and on Purpose too..
Created as a Dude with an alias of Jesus originally likely named something
close to Yeshua portrayed as just another Homeless Carpenter Dude Looking
for the Kindness of Strangers with empty pockets with the only thing to Give/Share
as Loving others without Harm.. YeaH a ReaL Auto-Biography of a Dude like that would
NoW Be
AwEsoMe
consideRing
in 4 BC
or so he
was Illiterate
Aramaic and
there was no
Mass Communication
And by the way i played
the Song ‘Jesus Christ Super
Star’ in Middle School and all
the Kids laughed at me when
i finished for my Autism made
(not available for diagnosis then)
it kinda hard to walk straight
iN mY TaLeNT SHoW then
with all that Emotional
Spirit and Stuff
that the
Music
Brought
through
my Fingers too
as the Southern
Baptist Christian
Boys also called
me Queer and
the F Word and
not Fred for
Smiling too
much for
Jesus F in Christ
mY Mother Helen was
A Whole lot like Mary
in the Love she
born and bred
as me..
problem is an
Auto-Biography
Rover in Real TiMe…
‘he’ WiLL be too big
to see other wise
‘they’ WiLL kill ‘him’ too..
Hehe.. Clever is what the Fox says..
in Back to this Future at Least for Now..
anyway.. Thanks Kim for ALLoWinG me to SPread
A FReader’s DiGesT ConDenSeD VeRSioN HeaR NoW..
It’s Pretty Simple Make God THE Naked Beach (LoVE) And Be THE Naked Beach (LoVE)
THaT2 iS WhY i’LL NeVeR NeeD To MaKE MoNeY AGaiNoW FoR i’M A RiCHLoVEBEaCH..;)
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Love your poem, art print, and prompt, Kim – Wheee!
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Ding, ding!
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