It doesn’t matter if you forget
the positions of stars in the night sky;
the delicate pattern of freckles on your skin
is a map of constellations from which I will sing
fairy tales, nursery rhymes and lullabies
to the music of the galaxies.
Kim M. Russell, 24th June 2018

My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Micro Poetry: It Doesn’t Matter, also linked to Poets United Poetry Pantry
Kerry says that the object of this challenge is to write a poem of between one and twelve lines, in a form of our choice, and our point of departure is the line: “It doesn’t matter” from ‘Come, Come, Whoever You Are’ by Rumi.
I have visited my daughter and grandson this weekend. I took him a baby glockenspiel and wrote this for him.
I LOVE this, and the image – and that you took him a glockenspiel…………there is nothing like the arival of a new baby to restore hope in one’s heart. Our family has one arriving in a month! My third great-grandchild.
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That’s wonderful news, Sherry! I wish I lived closer to them.
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Absolutely precious!
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Thank you, Donna!
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Oh, this is so beautiful!
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Thank you, Susie!
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So wonderful the constellation of freckles… so much more important than the patters of skies.
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Thanks Bjorn.
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My goodness this is soo beautiful, Kim! 😍😍😍
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Thank you, Sanaa! 😊
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Beautifully done! I love the freckles on the face as the map of the stars! Sooo good!
Dwight
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Thanks Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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Bravo!
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Thank you!
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Your grandson is in for a treat! Lovely 🙂
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Thanks Viv! I wish I lived closer. 😉
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Awww!
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Aaah! That is a delight. ♥
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Thank you!
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kaykuala
the delicate pattern of
freckles on your skin
Freckles can certainly invoke feelings of nearness with a loved one!
Hank
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My daughter’s father was covered in them.
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Sweet!
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Thank you, Rajani!
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And me? I never remembered them to start.
Liked the progression here. Thanks, it read nice.
BTW, we visited our oldest grandaughter this weekend. It was our youngest great-gtanddaughter’s first birthday.
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Thank you, Jim – and what a coincidence we were both visiting yesterday!
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Adorable wrote Kim. Happy you dropped by my Sunday Standard this week
much love…
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🙂
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much love…
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So sweet, gentle, loving. Freckles ARE a bit like stars for sure!
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Thank you, Mary!
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Awww.. what a beautiful poem to write for the occasion of your visit to your grandchild.
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Thank you, Kerry!
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kim thanks for linking to Monday WRites this week
much love…
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🙂
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Ohhhh! Utterly gorgeous.
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Thank you so much, Rosemary!
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This is so dreamy, so beautiful.
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Thank you so much, I’m pleased you like it.
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Most welcome
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This is just lovely, Kim. The bringing together of stars and freckles, and the power of (grand)maternal love.
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Thank you, Sarah! I’m already looking forward to the next visit for cuddles, books and games!
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I like the thought of using freckles as a map for telling fairy tales.
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My little grandson also has a strawberry birthmark in his arm that looks like a map of stars!
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That’s a wonderfully beautiful, loving perspective on freckle-ness Kim. This made for watm engaging reading.
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Thanks Rob!
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This is so sweet. I like to study the aging spots on my hands…used to have the big dipper but now other constellations have overtaken it! Good grief.
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Thank you, Victoria. My age spots have started to become more interesting too!
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Full of tenderness and love. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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Love can be felt no matter the distance. This poem is truly a gift for your grandson.
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Thank you, Mish.
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