and she is gold
a yellow globe
of chrysanthemum
joyful and optimistic
unfurling in the sun
in her heart
the warmth of summer
rustling gently
in the breeze
among burnished
falling leaves
ready to mourn
on the old year’s tomb.
Kim M. Russell, 7th October 2018

My response to dVerse Poets Pub Tuesday Poetics: What’s in an Name? also linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Amaya is tending bar this week and she wants to know our names. She says that she is in the season of life in which she has several lists of potential baby names and has spent countless sleepless nights trying to come up with the most melodic and meaningful pair of names to name an unborn child. She reminds us that, as parents, we hope that our progeny (or precious creatures) will live up to their names, or perhaps even more accurately, the essences of the names will define their characters.
As examples for today’s challenge, Amaya explores her own name and those of two poets: the first name of Walt Whitman and the last name of Margaret Walker. Today we are writing poetry about the meanings of our names. Amaya asks us to look at our given names, chosen aliases, middle names, family names, or maiden names and write an open-form poem of any length about their meanings. We don’t have to say what they are but are free to do so in a subscript.
This is wonderful… Love the joyfulness of your name… the ties to the seasons is excellent.
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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Great poem – such joyful colours. Kim could be an eastern name – your use of the chrysanthemum reminded me of that link.
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Thank you, Sarah.
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Exactly as I imagine you, Kim..Beautiful.
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Thank you, V.J.
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Very nice, Kim. I like how she is joyful but not naive.
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🙂
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This golden, joyful optimistic woman with a summer heart sounds familiar! She reminds me of someone…. 🤔 …. 👍🏽❤️
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Thank you, Viv! I’m sorry I’ve only just read your comment but I was so tired I went to bed early to read a book and then didn’t drop off until about eleven. Now I’m up early to do some reading! Have a great middle of the week! 😉 xxx
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That’s ok :), I sometimes don’t get to reply for days! You have a great week too. Loved your poem!
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Thank you, Viv!
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Such a lovely write — I enjoyed the summer-touched meanings and interpretations of your name, the imagery changing from season to season with a passing year and its mournful end.
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Thank you so much, Anmol.
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A lovely name specially with the meaning: joyful and optimistic. Autumn is my favorite season with its gold and falling leaves.
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Thank you, Grace. When I was sixteen a French-Vietnamese friend told me my name means gold in Vietnamese. I had to look up the other meanings. 🙂
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I do like this. And the brevity of the lines coupled with the rhythm adds to the boldness of your name.
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Thank you, Amaya.
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Is Kim short for Kimberly? Kim seems to fit you best. I always had a crush on Kim Novak as a kid.
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Thank you, Glenn, it’s just Kim. I don’t think I was named after anyone, but my Kindle keeps trying to change my last name to Kardashian! No thanks!
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Lovely, like the boldness of the bright gold chrysanthemum, joyful and optimistic and reference to the sun and season…nicely done
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Thank you, Dorianna.
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Love all the seasonal references. She’s sounds wonderful. Oh…it’s you!! 😉
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Thank you, Mish! 🙂
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Nice description: “a yellow globe
of chrysanthemum”
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Thanks Frank.
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a yellow globe
of chrysanthemum
an image that suggests the bearer a source of light and radiance – the entire poem is just so joyful – what a name should be like when we say it out loud.
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Thank you, Gina.
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Also a clever write. I loved the run-on lines and the imagery. Quite special. G:)
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Thank you, Graeme! 🙂
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Succinct, whirling, rejoicing, aflame.
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I never doubted it for a second ❤ you are all this and so much more, Kim! 😍😍
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Thank you, dear Sanaa! 😁💙
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I was thinking russet after Russell. I had no idea Kim meant all those things. If Russell is your husband’s name, you certainly picked the right one 🙂
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😊
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Born a Sayers, married and divorced a Bourke. I would like to stay a Russell. 😊
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I hope you do 🙂
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A flower in the sun. Blooming on and on! Very nice, Kim!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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It’s you right down to the last golden petal! I love the joyfulness here.
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Thank you, Linda!
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So lovely, Kim. I love the way the title and the first line run to each other.
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Thank you, De. 🙂
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Well of CourSE
K i am
WiLL
NormAlly
Be Gold As Ki’m..;)
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🙂
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:)!
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I am afraid of bold women, especially if they are tall and are with me in an elevator. One gets on. I get off the next floor.
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Oh Jim!
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Bold women are good, but they often do frighten some men.
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There’s bold (unafraid) and bod (pushy). I hope I’m unafraid 😉
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Sunny, optimistic a d bold indeed are like a mum, or dahlia. I imagine a lovely garden if Kims.
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Thank you, Kathy!
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Summer and hope
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Shining, crisp, playfully toe-tapping, reading out loud really has me moving my feet. 🎶
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Thank you, Lona! 💖
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We both use “unfurl” this prompt, love the waving revelatory feel of that word.
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😊
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Vibrant images and magnificant rhymes in this excellent tribute to your name, Kim! 🙂
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Thanks Frank! 😊
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This is lovely. I have always kind of despised mums… or at least I resent when they start popping up in the middle of summer as they do seem to put summer in the grave. This is beautiful.
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Thank you, Marian.
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