the coast
a jumble of cliffs and waves
constantly crashing
Kim M. Russell, 20th October 2018
My response to Carpe Diem Leafless Tree #1 introduction beautiful waves’
Chèvrefeuille has created a new feature, ‘Carpe Diem Leafless Tree’, which he hopes to publish every Sunday. In this new feature, he will introduce unknown haiku poets and challenge us to create haiku inspired by their ‘unknown’ haiku. For this first episode, he has chosen a contemporary, a disciple, of Shiki, Heiro Yaezakura (1879-1945). The title of this episode is taken from one of his haiku:
The boats
Escaping the heat at night
Move the beautiful waves
© Yaezakura
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Hmm smooth
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😊
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Very well done.
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Thank you, Janice!
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kaykuala
Yes, got the picture, Kim! Very real and very typical description of ‘waves
constantly crashing’
Hank
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🙂
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I can feel the water spatter on my face.
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🙂
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Another Sweet set of scenes. (@–>–)
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Thank you, Dorna!
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An interesting take on the subject.
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Thank you.
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