late in the afternoon,
I walk down an empty street
when, at my feet,
a russet
leaf
drops –
and so does the wind.
Like me, it settles
into its October
stillness, tired and sober,
fading into twilight,
slipping on the night.
Kim M. Russell, 19th October 2018
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Get Listed: October Edition
Sanaa is our host for the October edition of Get Listed. She says that there is something incredibly distinct and nostalgic about the way autumn carries the human spirit forward as we welcome change and prepare to start afresh with a clean slate. She would like us to come up with our own brief creations of under 150 words by choosing any four words from the lists that fit best with the mood/theme/personality of our poems on a topic of our choice.
Lovely how you used the words.
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Thank you, Vicki.
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‘settles into its October’ is wonderful.
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Thank you, Helen.
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This is absolutely amazing in it’s choice of imagery and diction! 😍 The way you lead us to the point where that “russet leaf drops – and so does the wind” creates a huge impact and redefines October in the mind of the reader. Love this so so so much, Kim! ❤️
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Thank you, Sanaa 😊💖🍁
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I think autumn does prepare us for the clean slate winter creates. As we welcome in the new year, and make new mantras and personal statements that will guide us through the rest of the seasons. I loved your imagery and voice in the poem.
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Thank you so much!
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Richly poetic…great use of the words.
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Thank you!
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Fading into twilight, slipping on the night- big sigh of appreciation for these beautiful words Kim!
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Thanks Linda!
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Always my pleasure!
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“settling” I love that
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Thank you, Margaret!
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That one leaf echoes the whole story of October, for all of Mom Nature’s wonders, us included.
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Thank you, Jim.
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You have captured the October stillness perfectly!
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Thank you, Kerry!
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I love how you capture that moment of that single leaf falling… we seems to have used similar imagery 🙂
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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