You
never fail
to rise to the
occasion. How often
have we stood face to
face? You, white balloon,
and me not immune to silver-
tongued charms. I wake in
your embrace and watch
you fade as the sun
nudges you from
the
s
k
y.
Kim M. Russell, 22nd April 2019
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Quadrille: Rise
Merril is our host this Quadrille Monday! She says that she often thinks of the quadrille as a sort of fun poem, perhaps a rest from writing villanelles, but a quadrille can be serious, too. She has given us a word that will allow for all sorts of possibilities: rise.
Merril says that when she started thinking about he word ‘rise, she came up with many ways in which it can be used, some of which she has shared. She has also shared two beautiful poems about rising: John Donne’s ‘Break of Day’ and Maya Angelou’s ‘Still I Rise’.
Oh love formatting… and the silver-tongued charm. How lovely (but way to early for me at this time of the year)
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Thank You, Bjorn!
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The balloon shape, with the dangling string sky brought a wide smile, and an aaawwww. I love how the moon remains nameless, and could be taken for paramour.
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I love that word, paramour!
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Oh, I love, love, love this Kim! Brilliant formatting and words.
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Thank you, Linda!
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Silver tongued charm!
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I love this–so much fun, Kim. The formating is wonderful, too.
I love to see the morning moon and then watch the sun rise, too.
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Thank you so much,, Merril. We’ve had a huge moon recently that has lured me to the window on my way to bed and I get up early enough to wave it goodbye!
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I love your balloon/immune rhyme, and the falling moon.
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Thank you, Jane. The moon has been particularly entrancing the last few days.
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I think you’ve been getting tremendous weather lately. The moon has been veiled here and it’s so windy!
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I’ll waft some spring sunshine your way, Jane! We spent much of yesterday and today in the garden, clearing rampant weeds and brambles. I’ve been scratched by thorns and stung by nettles but I loved every minute!
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I had a go on Saturday but it was too hot. Sunday, instead of being glorious was gloomy and windy. Today it’s just been windy. Wind from the east. Not good.
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I hope the weather improves. 😉
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It looks rocky for the foreseeable. Whatever that means.
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The way the words fall pulls the reader into the charming.
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Thank you, Jade.
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You are welcome.
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So nicely formatted. I like it a
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Thank you, Bev! 🙂
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I love the shape of this poem. Great work!
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Thank you, Crystal!
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A clever moon he is, always thinking he can enchant us…….ha! and he does. Just love this ….”not immune to silver-tongued charms”.
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Thanks Mish!
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This is so delightful. I can’t write my poems in pictures and shapes like that. Must be a certain app or something. I love face to face with the white balloon.
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Thank you, Mary. No app, just me and my keyboard. 🙂
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I also admire the shape of your poem…and the internal rhyme of balloon and immune 🙂
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So cool. What an ode to the moon. Yet the sun prevails.
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i so love the sky falling away in that format Kim. The moon is such a charmer and muse for poets.
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Thank you, Grace.
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A clever poem and an enjoyable read.
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I liked this quadrille poem. Maya Angelou’s poem Still I Rise is a great poem!
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So very well done Kim! Beautiful writing and loved the concreteness of the structure?
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Thank you, Rob!
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That moon is a real charmer – loved this balloon shaped poem…
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Beautiful! Love the sense of romance in this.
Pat
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Thank you, Pat!
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Very nice Kim!
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Thanks Dwight!
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I love the balloon!
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Thank you, Maggie!
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I like the sun nudging the moon with its light.
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Thanks Frank.
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Oh I loved the shape you used. Imitating the sinking or fading of the moon as the sun rises.
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Thank you so much, Fatima!
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The formatting is great. It fits perfectly.
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Thank you, Ken.
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