Looking Ahead

cricket silence
between scraping sounds
autumn begins Jane Reichhold

in a spiral of russet
first kamikaze leaf falls Kim M. Russell, 10^th May 2019

Today’s haiku from which to create a second stanza is by Jane Reichhold and it looks ahead to my favourite season.

9 thoughts on “Looking Ahead”

Poetry Pea (@ThePoetryPea) says:

May 10, 2019 at 1:18 pm

Kim, love the response. Maybe you’d like to have a go at creating one of the verses on my renku. Let me know…ciao Patricia

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1. kim881 says:
  
  May 10, 2019 at 7:51 pm
  
  Thank you, Patricia. I’d like to join in your renku. 😊
  
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rivrvlogr says:

May 10, 2019 at 2:49 pm

Nicely done, with the play of autumn/fall and the change in colors.

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1. kim881 says:
  
  May 10, 2019 at 7:50 pm
  
  Thank you, Ken!
  
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janicead says:

May 10, 2019 at 6:58 pm

Nice visual of the beginning of fall.

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1. kim881 says:
  
  May 10, 2019 at 7:47 pm
  
  Thanks Janice.
  
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dornahainds says:

May 11, 2019 at 4:27 pm

Oh! Such Vibrant Awesomeness! (@—>—)

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1. kim881 says:
  
  May 11, 2019 at 4:57 pm
  
  🙂
  
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Cressida says:

May 11, 2019 at 5:52 pm

I like the kamikaze leaf.

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