Sometimes, the mystery of a cat lies
in the luminescence of its eyes,
the blue, green or amber sparks
as it finds its way home in the dark.
At other times, it’s the touch of a whisker
as it passes by without a whisper.
Through an open window, there’s a whisper
of leaves in the willow, under which lies
my fastidious cat, cleaning her whiskers.
The green of the leaves reflects in her eyes
and a flicker of sunlight invades the dark
shadows, igniting her fur with a spark.
Sometimes, we catch a glimpse of their sparks,
their feline souls, when they purr and we whisper,
soothing in the tranquility of the dark.
We delight in the warmth of a cat as it lies
in our lap, the glow of the stare from its eyes,
and the contented quiver of its whisker.
In the middle of a dream, I’m woken by a whisker
tickling my face. I’m greeted by a spark
from a pair of luminous, unblinking eyes,
a velvet nose and a gentle whisper
of a purr that never tells me lies
or makes empty promises in the dark.
Sometimes, a cat crosses the street in the dark
and is missed by a vehicle, just by a whisker.
We’re grateful when we see that it lies
under a streetlight, lit by a spark
of luck, one of its nine lives. We whisper
our thanks, with tears in our eyes.
My cats are true friends, in my eyes;
they brighten my life whenever it’s dark
and come to me when I call or whisper,
with never a twitch of an ear or a whisker.
In my heart, my cats have ignited a spark
that burns with a love that never lies.
With their beautiful eyes and sensitive whiskers,
defying the dark and igniting a spark,
cats whisper love and never tell lies.
Kim M. Russell 29th August 2019
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Meeting the Bar: Homonyms – a help with forms
I missed Lillian’s Quadrille prompt on Monday and Anmol’s feline Poetics on Tuesday as I was still at my daughter’s on grandmother duty. I’d forgotten how exhausting an eighteen-month-old toddler can be and, when I got home, all I wanted to do was rest, but couldn’t because I had plenty to catch up on. However, today I made time to have another go at a sestina, which incorporates the Quadrille word (tranquility) and is about cats!
Oh I love the choice of the homonyms which made it flow so much easier… that little detail can always give you a choice between how it lies or if it lies.
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Thank you so much, Bjorn. 😉
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Kim, I love your feline sestina using homonyms. You capture the essence of cats and your affectionate relationship with them. Such pretty kitties!
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I’m pleased you love it, Jade!
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Nice take on the homonyms. I took that route too. An alternate title could be DOGS LIE–CAT’S DON’T. I never thought of that before; thanks.
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Thanks Glenn! Trump could never be a cat.
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A worthy subject for a sestina! Great word choice. (K)
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Many thanks, Kerfe.
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Aw, this is a lovely sestina. It flows beautifully. A real celebration of the feline. Our cat is feeling particularly fond of us at the moment, as we’ve been away.
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Thank you, Sarah. I’ve been away too, looking after Lucas while Ellen and Steve decorate their new home and I have to go back on 12th September for the final push, as Ellen doesn’t want to do much work when they move in the following week. I can understand why – Lucas is into everything and is a fast mover, running, climbing and tripping all over the place, picking up everything with his little fingers! I
So certain I returned in Tuesday, Mojo, our younger cat, has been very clingy, while Luna has been ignoring me!
Have you been on holiday? I hope you’re relaxed, healthy and happy.
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Great blending of the two prompts, Kim. I like how you played with both a rhyme scheme and homophone…that’s no “lie.” And your love for your fur baby shows through.
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Thank you, Victoria.
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Well done with your sestina Kim.
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Thank you, Rob!
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What an amazing tribute to your cat. I love how clever you made used of the end words with the homonyms. Cheers.
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Thank you, Garce!
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As I think you know, I’m a devotee of feline mysteries myself. And how well described they are here! It was a very nice touch to bring in rhymes, and works beautifully.
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Thank you so much, Rosemary. I thought I would struggle today with keeping Luna in, so that I can take her to the vet this afternoon. She moaned and cried to go out at first, but now she’s asleep on the bed with Mojo! All I have to do now is get her into her basket and into the car, where she’ll cry all the way to the vet’s. It’s only for her yearly vaccination and check-up – she hates going in the car.
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In my exoerience, they all hate going in the car.
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*experience
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Great sestina. I could feel your bond to your cats, a strong appreciation for their love.
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Thank you so much!
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