straight falling rain
tiny lakes upon the tree
stem hollows of apples
nature immerses her fruit
a yield of sparkling baubles
dad on high
dropping from his trees
apples for lunch
their acidic sweetness cuts
through fermented bread and cheese
windfall apples
palaces for worms
American pie
a fine feast for feathered friends
visiting the bird café
baskets in a row
overflowing with apples
on one a sweater
pervaded with fruity scent
laden with sweet memories
southern sunset
filling the apple bin
a deeper red
a harvest of ripe blushes
under cover of the night
applesauce
the cinnamon glow
of a kerosene lamp
comfort of grandmother’s house
listening to autumn rain
Jane Reichhold Kim M. Russell, 4th November 2019

My response to Carpe Diem #1774 Renga With Jane Reichhold: apples for lunch
Today our challenge is to create a Renga With Jane from six haiku created by her, all on the theme of apples, which have been taken from her online saijiki A Dictionary of Haiku. The goal is to add our own two-lined stanzas.We may can choose your own line-up, and our ageku (closing verse) must be linked to the hokku (opening verse).
I like the fruity scent memories and the rain at Grandma’s cosy house. Lovely images.
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😊 🍎🍏🌧
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A full season (k)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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Love this, you can almost smell the cinnamon.
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Thank you, Amanda.
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such a Scrumptious Delight! (@—>—-)
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😉
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The verse about the bread and cheese made me think: apple pie and cheddar cheese is something I haven’t had in a while. I should consider remedying that situation! 😉
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Thanks Cara – I was thinking the same thing!
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The verse about the bread and cheese made me think: apple pie and cheddar cheese is something I haven’t had in a while. I should consider remedying that situation! 😉
~Cie~
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I have plenty of cheese, just no apple pie!
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This poem brings back many fond childhood memories, and it is skillful with crisp imagery!
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Thank you kindly!
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