how I wish to call
a white crane from Fukei,
but for this cold rain
Kikaku
desolate drips from the roof
instead of soothing wingbeats
Kim M. Russell, 13th November 2019

My response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Wednesday (5) White Crane
In today’s new episode of ‘Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Wednesday’, we have a haiku by Kikaku, a contemporary and disciple of Matsuo Basho, which he wrote to comfort Basho in the last days of his life.
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Hi, Thanks for sharing such a beautifully penned poem. Stunningly supported by Koson (Naga Oban) image of the White Crane. Your words and Koson’s image a beautiful combination. I have re-blogged. Have a wonderful day. Goff
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Thank you for your kind comment, Goff, and for the reblog.
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Hi, Kim. My pleasure. Best Regards. Goff
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Great response.
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Thank you, Ken!
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