How much gas does a mother need?
Forget the air – there’s none in space.
Energy and gravity played their part,
pulling together at the heart
of the conception,
a passionate ménage à trois.
A single push
excruciatingly long,
squeezing an interstellar
nebula into a brand-new star,
a twinkle in its mother’s eye,
a cosmic diamond in the sky.
Kim M. Russell, 12th November 2019

My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Let Us Labor
Amaya is our host tonight with hormonal cocktails with a shot of oxytocin to prepare us for the expansive world of birth – in a poetic context.
She says that when we think of the word ‘birth’, we tend to go right to the birth of a newborn human baby. and the poems she has shared, by Li-young Lee, Aracelis Girmay and Rachel Jamison Webster, are mostly based on human birth, but she would like us to look at birth with a wider, or even a cosmic perspective, considering brand new beginnings and possibly even the miraculous.
Amaya asks us to meditate on the concept of birth and see how our own poems are born on the page. I took the idea of cosmic ‘seriously’.
That is one big birth! I love the concept, and the humour of that twinkle.
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Thank you, Sarah!
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I love the birth of stars.
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Me too!
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I love how you thought of the birth of star the way you would think of a mother… just maybe the gravity is the midwife of matter in this.
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Thanks Bjorn. I agree about gravity as the midwife.
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Love the way you went with the prompt….and most especially those last two lines!!! 🙂 Smiling I am with the brightness and light of your post. Especially welcome on this COLD and DREARY day in Boston!
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Thank you, Lill! It’s cold and dreary here too. I lit the fire yesterday and have a feeling I’ll be doing that every day for a few months at least.
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Such a unique and imaginative take on the prompt. Beautifully done! Love that first line 🙂
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🙂
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I love ‘cosmic diamond in the sky.’ Very creative Kim!
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You can tell I sing nursery rhyme a lot – I have Bounce and Rhyme again today!
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Gorgeous photo and description of “the big bang.”
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Thanks Jade!
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YW!
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We are stardust…
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So much truth in Joni’s words.
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Three cheers for Genesis, and for your perception of part of it. I applaud your imaginative take on the prompt.
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Thank you so much, Glenn!
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Wonderful imagery. (K)
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Thanks Kerfe.
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A beautiful birth!!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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What a delightful comparison Kim. ‘A twinkle in its mother’s eye’ Lovely! 🙂
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Thank you, Christine! 🙂
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What a magnificent and resplendent birth that is! Thanks for pointing our eyes to the stars, Kim.
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Thanks for your kind comment, Lynn!
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kaykuala
How wonderful and what a relief after 9 months of excruciating love given
Hank
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