At Dawn

a crack in the sky
light trickles become a flood
expelling darkness Kim M. Russell, 20^th November 2019

at dawn birds start to sing
praising their Creator … as always Chèvrefeuille

It’s Tan Renga Wednesday and this week our challenge is to create the hokku for a given two-lined stanza.

7 thoughts on “At Dawn”

calmkate says:

November 20, 2019 at 7:21 am

beautiful words and stunning shot Kim!

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1. kim881 says:
  
  November 20, 2019 at 7:45 am
  
  Thank you, Kate!
  
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  1. calmkate says:
    
    November 20, 2019 at 8:41 am
    
    most welcome
    
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dornahainds says:

November 20, 2019 at 9:22 pm

fabulous imagery! (@—>—-)

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1. kim881 says:
  
  November 21, 2019 at 6:22 am
  
  Thank you, Dorna! 😊
  
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the real cie says:

November 21, 2019 at 4:04 am

Your Hokku makes me think of a scene from Fantasia, which was such a visually stunning movie.

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1. kim881 says:
  
  November 21, 2019 at 6:17 am
  
  Thank you, Cara, for such a lovely comment.
  
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