washed with twilight rain
scarlet-hued hibiscus blooms
a lovely sunset
Kim M. Russell, 3rd December 2019
My response to Carpe Diem #1790 A Lovely Sunset
The first episode of a new month of CDHK is a double one and ‘Never Change A Winning Team’ continues into December.
The first challenge is to ‘revise’ a haiku by Matsuo Basho:
in the twilight rain
these brilliant-hued hibiscus –
a lovely sunset.
Basho
writing in north norfolk 
The subtle difference is beautiful. I think Basho would be pleased.
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A subtle difference, but it adds a new dimension. Nicely done!
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Thank you, Cara!
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A lovely make over
Much☺love
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Thank you, Gillena! 🙂
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another Marvelous Haiku! well done, Kim. (@—>—)
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Thank you, Dorna! 🙂
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A lovely sunset indeed!
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Thank you!
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