washed with twilight rain
scarlet-hued hibiscus blooms
a lovely sunset
Kim M. Russell, 3rd December 2019
My response to Carpe Diem #1790 A Lovely Sunset
The first episode of a new month of CDHK is a double one and ‘Never Change A Winning Team’ continues into December.
The first challenge is to ‘revise’ a haiku by Matsuo Basho:
in the twilight rain
these brilliant-hued hibiscus –
a lovely sunset.