Although trees are still mostly green, the year is finally turning. Autumn is here: hedges are crimson with berries; leaves are yellowing, and the year is fading to brown. In the air, there is already a taste of frost. I find myself willing leaves to change colour and fall, so that I can crunch them underfoot and inhale the sweet smell of decay. Mushrooms and toadstools abound, some are bright splashes of colour, attracting worms and beetles. And in a few days’ time, fading storm clouds will be backlit by the moon, orange and cheerful like a pumpkin in the sky.
by light of the moon
harvesting the falling leaves
a brittle landscape
Kim M. Russell, 28th September 2020

My response to dVerse Poets Pub Haibun Monday: To the Moon!
Frank is our host this Monday, with a lunar prompt to celebrate the moon. The reason for this prompt is October, which is going to have two full moons: the Harvest moon on October 1st and, on Halloween, the Hunter’s moon.
Frank reminds us that the moon is a traditional autumn kigo and that there are kigo for the Harvest Moon, as well as for the nights preceding and following it. He has also poems inspired by the moon, by Robert Louis Stevenson and Florence Ripley Mastin, and a haiku by Matsuo Basho.
Frank invites us to write haibun in which we use the word ‘moon’, alluding to whatever context we find most meaningful, remembering to include a seasonal reference, and a complement of divergent images that provokes insight.
I love the joy you are expressing about the autumn… my feelings are mixed as I do love the daylight even more. But hunting for mushrooms is an important part of autumn. We picked a small harvest this weekend and last.
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I just love autumn, especially the smells and the colours.
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Autumn is our favorite season, too! We’ve already begun to see fall foliage. I love your portrait of Autumn joy!
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Thank you, Frank!
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“backlit by the moon, orange and cheerful like a pumpkin in the sky“
Gorgeous. It has me humming Alexi Murdoch’s “Orange Sky.”
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Thank you, Shawna.
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I just looked up that song on YouTube and am listening to it now – I hadn’t heard of Alexi Murdoch. I’m enjoying it. 🙂
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I love the Autumn too. It’s such an enjoyable, cool season. You describe its essence perfectly here, Kim:
“Autumn is here: hedges are crimson with berries; leaves are yellowing, and the year is fading to brown. In the air, there is already a taste of frost.”
The taste of frost… So descriptive! I can imagine the coldness that strikes right before the Winter season. Another beautiful, well written piece. It’s quite lovely.
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Thank you,, Lucy. autumn has been my favourite season since I was a child. I love the smell of bonfires and wood smoke from chimneys, and the kicking up leaves.
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There is so much to love about Autumn, and you capture that sensual experience which it offers so well here. I must remember to count each Autumn blessing and keep the blues at bay!
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For some weird reason your comment ended up in my trash, Ingrid! Thank you for your words.
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The same keeps happening to me so don’t be offended if it takes me a while to reply! Must ask techy husband to look at my spam settings…
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I can’t decide whether I love Autumn more or this haibun! This is absolutely stunning in terms of language and emotions that come with the season. 💝
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That is such a lovely comment, Sanaa! 🙂
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🥰👏
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The last line of your haibun is perfect for the fragile nature of a season that is far too short.
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Thanks Ken. I agree, autumn is too short and winter far too long.
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I imagine your photo a moon hiding in the grass, waiting for night. Wonderful seasonal haibun, Kim.
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Thank you, Lisa.
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You’re welcome.
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I like autumn for many of the reasons you cite, it’s just that wily weasel Winter, comes in roaring, stripping trees bare, coating us with ice and snow that raises my ire, and gets my goat.
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Yep, they can keep winter.
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I love the last line. The image of a brittle landscape fragile in the moonlight sums up the edginess of these times.
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Thanks Suzanne.
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Beautiful haibun full of anticipation. Luv it
Happy Monday Kim
Much💓love
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Thank you, Gillena. It’s a happy Tuesday now!
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You and my granddaughter are anxious for the changing season 🍁
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My favourite time of the year 🙂
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I like this cheerful rendering of autumn. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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I love the idea of the moon as a pumpkin in the sky. And the brittle sky works so well, too.
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Thanks Sherry.
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I like the rich details of the “brittle landscape” in your haibun, Kim.
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Thank you, Lynn.
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This was a great haibun, Kim. I am so ready for fall, after this hot Covid Summer!
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Thank you, Dwight. It seems to me that we would all like to forget 2020.
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It has been a most challenging year.
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I think we’re a little closer to crunchville than you are, KR; but we gots us some GREAT colors. Couple good windy days & dey be goner.
Your haibun ROCKS!
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You’re too kind, Ron!
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Wonderful fragrances and sounds of autumn Kim, loved it…! 🙂
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Thank you, Rob!
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You reminded me of the sharp tang of frost and the crisp sound of it. I’m still having trouble with the rain. All those autumn colours! All it needs is a bit of sunshine and it’s all bearable.
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We have persistent drizzle now and the sky is that very pale grey that feels oppressive. Some autumn sunshine would be welcome.
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Yes, what happened to all that mellow fruitfulness?
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excitement mixed with melancholy, the change of leaves heralds the closing of another year …
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Thanks Kate. 🙂
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I agree Kim. Willing leaves to turn color. Always sad at the closing of summer. If it’s fall, then be fall right away and be gloriously arrayed in color! I am so impatient!
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Me too!
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I enjoyed reading your haibun … Autumn is my favorite season, you captured the feel of it perfectly.
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Thank you, Helen. It’s my favourite too.
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This is so nicely constructed, Kim. For me, the “taste of frost” brought to a head all the surrounding sensations you describe so vividly: yes, autumn is here.
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Thank you so much, Dora.
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You depict such lovely images of autumn (and its crackling sounds). That’s the part of autumn I like–when it’s clear and bright and the sun shines on the brilliant leaves. Early autumn is often beautiful. Later autumn not so much–and I don’t like the shorter days and then the dreariness and cold.
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Thank you, Merril. I’m not a fan of steadiness and cold either.
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