A staid image of a placid
woman dressed in blue,
only hands and face exposed,
no crown bejewelled,
your child swaddled:
this was how I thought of you.
I didn’t know the church
imagined you as tripartite too:
royally dressed in ermine and silk,
breast exposed, a woman
of human flesh, blood and milk,
miraculously still a virgin.
It wasn’t you the angels preserved,
but the naked child, the one they served.
Kim M. Russell, 20th December 2020
A seasonal poem for Poets and Storytellers United Writers’ Pantry #51 Year’s End
This is a poem I originally wrote for an ekphrastic prompt, inspired by the right panel of The Melun Diptych, created around 1452 by the French court painter Jean Fouquet (c. 1420–1481). The two pieces of the diptych are now separated: the left panel can be found in the State Museum in Berlin, while the right panel is at the Royal Museum of Fine Arts in Antwerp.
I wish you as merry a Christmas as is possible under current circumstances and love, peace and good health for the New Year.
The last two lines are perfect. They were unexpected and took me back to examine the painting further. Beautiful. Happy holidays, Kim!
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Thank you so much, Rajani, and happy holidays!
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This is really very good, particularly the slant rhymes.
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Thank you, Misky. I’m fond of slant rhymes.
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Great poem for this season.
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Thank you, Robin. Merry Christmas!
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Yes, I think it’s important to remember that Jesus was born into human form and needed to experience all the normal things like mother’s milk – and that Mary, for all the miraculousness of what happened to her, was a woman like any other, who still needed to feed her baby.
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Thoughts for Christmas. I wish you a merry, cosy one, Rosemary, and hope that 2021 will be so much better.
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Amazing ekphrastic. Happy Sunday. Thanks for dropping by to read mine
Much 💜love
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Thank you, Gillena. Happy Sunday and merry Christmas!
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It Seems This
Middle Ages
Portrait
Of Mary
Is Quite Prophetic
Of Silicone Additions
Centuries
Later
As Generally
Speaking Gravity
Has More Of
An
Impact
On Feeding
God Milk Such
A Twist In The
Story
And Truly
A Bit Twisted
So JeSuS is
God And Personally
Arranges For His
Mother
To Be
Pregnant
With God The
Obvious Short
Cut i Will Still
Provide to
God LiVE iN
All Then And
Now Forever
More As This
Is Putting
The
Cart
Before
The Mother’s
Milk Gravity
Dividing
Yet
No
Healthy
Usual Dude
Will Turn
Away
From
Nature’s
Most Basic Meal
And Verily
Core Muse
For All
Arts
As
Shakira
Dances
Sings True
‘Hips Don’t Lie’
Either Any
Way
Every
Painting
And Image
Says More
Than
Word
Pictures Alone
Other That Just
A Redo of Egyptian
Goddess Isis And
Greek Goddess
Of Fertility
Youth Hebes
Always With
A Breast
Exposed
For Art of
Muse Oldest
Human Art
Before Paint Copies Breath🍃
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Wow! Happy Christmas!
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Same to You
On the dVerse
Poetry Trail Kim.. With
Merry Christmas 🎁 SMiles
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A striking poem for an image that, to be honest, gives me the shudders. Merry Christmas!
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Thank you, Wyndolynne, and a merry Christmas to you!
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A wonderful ekphrastic work, KR. Coincidentally, I’ve posted back-to-back nativity imagery as well.
Enjoy the holidays break & write on, Sister.
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Thanks Ron! I’ll be back in the morning to read and comment. Have a peaceful, cosy Christmas, Ron. See you in the New Year!
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My relationship to Mary’s story has always been one full of questions. Not about the veracity of the myth–that doesn’t really matter to–but about her role, the choices she never had, how she was treated… I love what your poem illustrates about the painting and the story itself. I enjoy that some of the emotions that it evokes are… difficult and real. And those last two lines are the best part of the whole (for me).
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Thank you, Magaly. Much love and best wishes for a happy, peaceful Christmas and a much better New Year.
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I found the Mary statue in the church I grew up with to be sweet and comforting, blue too. Those French can be kind of shocking! Love the write.
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Thank you, Colleen.
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A lovely, lovely write for this Season … and thanks for the notes, very interesting. Happy Holidays to you and yours.
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Thank you, Helen. Merry Christmas to you and your family.
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and your thoughts thereon, Kim. Your talent always brightens my day. Blessings on you and yours t his holiday season!
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Thank you, Bev, for your lovely comments. Happy holidays to you and your family!
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Women are always an afterthought, which is one of the reasons that I parted ways with the church when I turned 18.
I hope your holidays are pleasant.
~cie~
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Thanks Cara. I’m not into organised religion, especially one organised by men. Have a peaceful holiday. 🙂
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Oh I love your ending!
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Thank you, Susie!
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Why is that painting so off-putting? I can imagine the model for that “Mary.” Hair fashionably shaved away from her face so no sinful tresses crept out from under her headdress. Full breasts pushed high up by the tight waistband. Even the small size and undersized chin that go with the tapered waist–I used to know someone who had that shape. It was considered an odd look in the twentieth century. Nice to remember that it was a fashionable look once, probably more admired because it’s unusual…Even so, the painting looks wrong, somehow. I suppose because the painter was trying to capture a moment that didn’t last long enough for him to draw it very well, and because the Baby looks big enough to be wearing clothes, if not going to school.
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Medieval paintings are off-putting. Their whole world view is strange to us. But I suppose ours would be strange to them. And what would they make of modern art? The artist was a man after all, a medieval one at that, who wouldn’t understand about motherhood and being a woman – or babies and childhood. Did they even have childhood then?
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I like this. There were separated panels like that in Florence’s museums.
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Thank you, Yvonne. I love Florence.
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Beautiful! Happy New Year!
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Thank you, Ayala, and a happy New Year to you!
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