a glass of wine
not mine
blood red
against white
linen
shimmers
with candlelight
stirs emotions
and baffles heads
makes us dazed
and confused
as someone once said
with one flick
of a napkin
the glass is dashed
white linen
adorned with rosy blush
Kim M. Russell, 5th April 2021
Image by Edge2EdgeMedia on Unsplash
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Quadrille: In Praise of the Grape
Linda, our host for this week, begins her prompt with a quote from Ernest Hemingway about wine being “one of the most civilized things in the world and one of the most natural things of the world that has been brought to the greatest perfection”. My first response was this:
I bade goodbye to Bacchus long ago,
renounced the potent blood of grapes,
the pale and crisp, the honeyed glow,
blushing pink and cherry red escapes.
This was mainly because I have seen how potent it was for some of my friends and, remembering mistakes I made while drunk on wine in my youth, I very rarely touch it now, only on special occasions. But I can see its attraction.
The word for this Monday’s Quadrille, our 44-word poem, is ‘wine’, any form thereof, or even one we create that contains the word. Linda has shared a fascinating tidbit about wine windows in Florence, which she found out about from watching ‘Stanley Tucci: Searching for Italy’. Here on the Norfolk Broads, a pub once sold drink and provisions from a window to wherrymen and holiday makers, so they didn’t have to leave their boats. She has also shared an extract from Shelley’s ‘The Vine Shroud’ and Poem 132 by Emily Dickinson, ‘I Bring an Unaccustomed Wine’.
Yes, many of us have had our share of ‘things I regret while drinking wine’. Perfect Kim.
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Thanks Linda.
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beautifully tight picture you gave us to drink in here Kim! an accident waiting to happen – the result is that sharp intake of breath and yet I also loved picturing the red on white
p.s. coincidentally I was singing this today!
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🙂
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I love it (your poem) straight up or as a metaphor.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Yes, an accident waiting to happen. So many can relate to that.
I like wine, but I seldom have more than one glass with food. I don’t like being dazed and confused.
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I don’t need alcohol to feel dazed or confused, Merril! ;0
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🤣
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Kim, cool write! I too eschew the nectar of the vine. Never liked it much. Mine was smokey single malt. Loved hearing the Zep — Jim, Bob, and the boys… 🙂
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Glad you enjoyed it, Rob!
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Oooo. Well “spilled.” 😉
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Thank you, De! 😉
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A most suitable compliment!
❤
David
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Oh yes, there’s always the risk of things going badly. Lots of tension here, Kim.
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Thanks Sarah!
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In college and the Navy, I did a lot of wine, and suffered for it. Alcohol is a poison to my system; haven’t touched it in 40 years.
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There are so many drinks that are non-alcoholic and tasty. Alcohol kills the taste buds.
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Everything is going so well and as easily there come the upset
Happy Easter
Much💛love
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Thanks Gillena! Happy Easter!
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I’m with you, Kim. No desire for the vino. I do, however, appreciate a Bloody Mary or an Amaretto Sour from time to time!
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I don’t mind a very occasional lager or cider, Bev, and I have been known to drink a very small gin.
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It is quite precarious when you think about it…..long stemmed glass, red liquid combined with tipsy person.
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I’m tipsy even without alcohol, Mish!
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A great poem! I love the feeling of the red wine against the white linen! Good for you for knowing your limits!
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Thanks Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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Sometimes, the wine does go to one’s head and causes confusion.
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Yes there is a fine line between being giggly from alcohol, to that moment when you develop an edge. Then it is no longer cute and pretty. Just ugly. 😕 Very well written Kim. I loved the image of the red wine against the white linen. Blush indeed!
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Thanks Christine! I hate embarrassing myself.
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Sadly we have all done that at least once in our lives
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The visual of red wine against white linen is vivid. Oops! The word ‘accident’ exists for a reason.
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I’m naturally clumsy, so I don’t need any help from alcohol!
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I feel the control is teetering and then in the end we have the red stain, powerful in it’s brevity and message!
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Thank you, Tricia.
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Nice, Kim: subtly illustrates the damage wine can do from the point of view of the sober observer!
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I have been the sober observer for many years and avoid places where people drink because they always try to force it on me.
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That happens in our family all the time! With white linen we try to go with white wine. But wine is oh, so flavorful!
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Beautifully expressed!
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Thanks so much, Mary!
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White linen adorned with rosy blush! What a lovely description of a wine spill! 🙂
Ah yes….too much wine, not a good thing….but I do love my glass of chardonnay each evening! I will say, I never write in the evening….the muse strikes most when coffee is at hand. It is silenced by wine. 🙂
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Thank you, Lill. I couldn’t write in the evening; I struggle to read and comment too. Morning is the best time for me.
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You painted a moving picture with words, Kim. Great write.
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Thank you, Helen.
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