Hope is a bat hunting moths round a light only for both to be swallowed by night; it’s the sweet chime of birdsong, the patter of rain when summer has gone, and we can breathe again; it is the wash of waves and their up and down after static traffic in a busy town; it’s the giggling gurgle of living water; and the offspring of an only daughter.
Kim M. Russell, 8th September 2022

Björn has set the bar high for this week’s Meeting the Bar at the dVerse Poets Pub, with an aphorism prompt. He says that, even if we don’t know it, we probably use aphorisms in everyday life.
He has provided a definition of an aphorism: a statement that presents a moral or philosophical idea with a pithy statement that expresses a general idea of the world as, for instance, a metaphor, and gives the example of ‘The grass is always greener on the other side (of the fence)’, which has become a well-known idiom. Björn says that many of us use quotes as part of our poems, and very often these quotes can be seen as aphorisms.
Today, Björn would like us to formulate our own aphorisms. Another option is to take an existing aphorism and reformulate into something new. Tricky!
Oh, I love them all… especially the first one which somehow makes it seems a bit hopeless to hope… Yes, this was tricky I realized. I have been thinking a lot about this one and still just managed to do something short and (maybe witty)
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Thank you, Björn!
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Lovely, Kim. Hope is so many things, all of them beautiful.
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Thank you, Jane!
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Great stuff throughout, Kim, but that closing line is a killer-diller!!! YOWZAGOOD. Thanks
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Thank you, Ron. Your comments always cheer me up.
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Lovely💛
Much💛love
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Thank you, Gillena! Much love to you!
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Oh how I love all of these!
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Thank you, Mary!
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You are welcome Kim.
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Especially those offspring. (K)
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Definitely, Kerfe! My daughter is expecting another son in November and I’m so excited.
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I love your opening aphorism. Well done Kim.
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Thanks so much Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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Love your last line!!!
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Thank you, Judy!
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This is lovely, Kim. Hope articulated so prettily.
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Thank you, Jo!
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So beautiful, Kim…all of those.
I can understand how you must be feeling at the queen’s passing away. Please accept my commiserations.
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Thank you, Punam.
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You are welcome.
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Beautiful and lyrical. Rather like a nursery rhyme.
~Ornery Owl~
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Thanks so much!
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That shift always feels like a breath of clean air. Wonderful examples, Kim.
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Thanks Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Really thought provoking!
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Thank you, Christine!
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Particularly like”the wash of waves” and the “static traffic”. A poem to come back to!
JIM
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Thanks Jim!
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