I’ve had enough of being haunted. It’s not that I’m afraid of the ghost in the corner, but she’s a distraction, especially when I’m reading, writing or watching television. She always has a little smile on her lips and a twinkle in her eye, as if she’s making fun of me.
I admit, I do talk to her – a lot – bouncing ideas off her or telling her my problems. She never once voices an opinion.
But a few months ago, I started seeing Arthur, the first man who was interested in me for a while, and he was coming to dinner on Valentine’s Day.
I warned the ghost in the corner: “This year’s a different thing – I’ll not think of you.” She smiled and twinkled in her corner throughout the meal.
Arthur disappeared before dessert, incensed that my mother had gate-crashed our date.
Kim M. Russell, 13th February 2023

Paul Cézanne – Madame Cézanne In A Yellow Armchair (image found on Wikimedia)
Today at the dVerse Poets Pub, Merril is hosting Prosery Monday, when we write prose, not poetry. It can be flash-fiction or creative non-fiction, should be short prose no longer than 144 words in total (not including the title) and it must include the given poetry line, word for word, although we may break the line and add punctuation, but we cannot change the words in the line or insert words.
Merril has chosen a line from a poem by Charlotte Mew (1869-1928), who she says lived a sad life, about which she has given us some details. As tomorrow is Valentine’s Day, she has picked a line from a poem of lost love, ‘I so liked spring’:
“This year’s a different thing, –
I’ll not think of you.”
I love it, Kim! I was not expecting that ending!
I love that the ghost has such a distinct personality, too. 💙
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I’m so glad you enjoyed it, Merril!
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I did!
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Oh dear. I think she needs to get out and about instead of pulling others into the ghost’s turf. That was quite creepy yet sort of funny also. Good writing, Kim!
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Thanks Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Wonderful!
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Thanks so much, Marilyn!
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Seems children and old folks both have their imaginary friends!
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Or maybe not imaginary after all…
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Oh, you might be right!
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Well done, Kim!
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Thanks Dwight!
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Entertaining☺
Much❤love
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Thanks, Gillena, and much love to you!
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Oh this was a fun piece Kim. A saucy, impish ghost. I loved it. ☺️💕
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I based her on the ghost next door, although since our old neighbours moved away, she seems to have given up the ghost! The new neighbours haven’t seen her at all.
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Oh a truly haunted house! Love it ☺️💕
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Loving the atmosphere evoked in this snapshot of a quirky piece! ❤
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Thank you Layla!
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I like the subtle humor in this Kim. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe. I’m so glad you spotted it.
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Gate crashing mothers would present a very bothersome embarrassment. I like your Cézanne, he is one of my favorites.
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I quite like when ghosts gatecrash – it adds something to the occasion!
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That was quite entertaining. I enjoyed the bit of mystery that was woven into the story.
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Thank you. The mystery is something to develop another time.
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A great flash fiction, Kim! Leaves the reader wanting more!
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Thank you Jay. I like writing these short pieces, which I can develop into something longer at a later time.
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Ouch! Even if the ghost doesn’t have the last word, she sure knows how to turn the knife…
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🙂
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Maybe she was better off without someone who could see her ghosts!
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