In Norfolk, we’re surrounded by water: the sea, the Broads, and rain’s no stranger. Overnight downpours drench field and garden, fill water butts, gutters, and rain- drops sparkle on the plants on my patio, where green dill fronds unfurl and the lavender is purple. Kim M. Russell, 24th July 2023
It’s Quadrille Monday at the dVerse Poets Pub with our host, De, who says she is here ’to make a poetic splash’ with our ‘pithy little poem of precisely 44 words, not counting the title, and including one word we provide’.
De says that the word she has provided ‘makes up 71% of the earth’s surface. Life cannot survive without it. We drink it, wash with it, swim in it, and try to conserve it. Ah, yes. Good ol’ H2O’. Today, we are pouring some form of the word water into our poems. She has also given us some ideas for words that contain water, together with an excerpt from and an example of poems about water by Patrick Rosal and Sylvia Plath.


Love this, Kim. As a girl from the desert who’s a mermaid at heart, this sounds simply DIVINE!
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Thank you! I can’t imagine living in or near a desert, De!
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How lovely, Kim. I must take a photo of my lavender. It’s massive this year. We’re heading into our hottest time of the year in Michigan. Rain sounds nice.
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Thank you, Colleen. It’s cool here now the rain has stopped – and very green!
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I remember the almost florescent-green color in England. I’ve never seen that color anywhere else.
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Ireland – it rains a lot there too!
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I bet it’s stunning!
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It makes things grow and green. Great quadrille, Kim.
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Thanks Lisa. The rain stopped this afternoon and I went for a walk, Everything is green!
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❤
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Here in Jerusalem, rain is what we get in the winter instead of snow… I miss me a good snowstorm! It’s lovely that you have so much water everywhere, Kim ❤
~David
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Thanks David!
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this brings back memories of my childhood in south Norfolk. the smell of the pine forest I played in when it rained.
thanks for the trip down memory lane
great poem.
rog
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Thank you! Were you down near Thetford, Rog?
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Born in Thetford
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Beautiful, flowing work, Kim. Thanks for the share
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Thanks for reading, Ron!
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Lovely !!!
Happy Monday.
Much💜love
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Thanks Gillena and much love to you!
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A lush poem. Lovely.
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Thanks Marilyn! Not as colourful as your garden, but it’s ours. 🙂
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Such a lovely place and I love the photos too.
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Thank you Grace!
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Nicely done quadrille.
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Thanks Maria!
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A great descriptive poem, Kim. I like all the detail in your poem.
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Thank you Dwight!
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I love the last bit especially!
‘where green dill fronds unfurl and the lavender is purple.’
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Thank you, Carol! We’ll be using some of the dill this week.
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Very pretty poem, Kim. It helps when I like rain.
Pretty patio greens too.
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Cheers Jim!
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Your line breaks are magical. I love the flow of words and water in this one.
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Thank you kindly!
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We’ve had our fair share of water up in Cumbria as well! But it’s good to see green grass again 😊
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It’s so damp in our garden, the grass stays green.
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Love how your water produces such greenery.
We have fennel plants that are about two metres tall with lovely yellow flowers and ferny leaves. I always thought dill was the seeds of fennel, but I’m obviously mistaken!
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Fennel leaves are longer and they taste stronger than dill.
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We always let them go to seed because the flowers are so pretty. Haven’t eaten a single bulb yet.
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We like fennel in risotto.
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How do you do it? Add the bulb chopped up small with the soffritto?
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I’m not sure. David’s the chef around here!
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I’ll look it up. The internet is my friend when it comes to looking up recipes.
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sounds wonderful!
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Well-described.
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Lovely Kim – it’s been raining here in North Wales too for the last 3 days on and off, but as you say, everything is luscious and green 😊
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Thank you, Ange! The weather looks much better this morning. I think we should have temperatures of up to 23 degrees.
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I love the peaceful aura of this poem.
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Thank you Nicole!
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Ooh I love this, Kim. I love vivid imagery with which you describe nature both on the patio and off. I really like how you split
“rain-
drops sparkle”
❤️
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Thank you, Melissa. I’m glad you commented on that split!
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