We grew up in flats
with too many stairs to the top,
and yet I ran up them, brave
and unafraid, more
scared of the piss-scented lift
that always stopped
between floors.
Accompanied by the roar
of traffic speeding along
London Road, I’d pick my way
between parked cars,
where dads smoked,
and mums called kids in to tea
from balconies on the upper floors.
Plimsolled feet gripped
metal bars; we climbed
the padlocked gate
and leaped into a place
that was fresh and new,
the playing field that rescued
us from the top floor.
As teenagers, we grew into
the sounds of London:
the backing track of traffic and sirens;
buses pulsing like blood through
the veins of the city;
the Underground rumbling
below our feet.
As young adults, we walked home
in a blur of street lights and neon signs,
passing office workers and shoppers,
homeless people in shop door-ways,
always a frisson of danger
while waiting for the bus,
black cabs circling like sharks.
Kim M. Russell, 16th January 2024

Image by Adam Birkett on Unsplash
Punam is our host for Poetics at the dVerse Poets Pub this Tuesday, with a city love prompt. She says that cities have been described as ‘concrete jungles or human zoos … And yet, when poets write on their surroundings they usually prefer to write about the countryside.’ However, ‘there are poems about cities … that capture urban life’s complexities, diversity and vibrancy. The bright lights, the bustling streets and the entire spectrum of experiences found within these urban landscapes have been the muse of many poets.’ She has given examples by Robert Browning, William Blake, T.S. Eliot and Jamaal May to whet our poetic whistles.
Love them or hate them, for today’s Poetics, Punam would like us to write poems showing the beauty of our cities or why we love the city we live in presently or in the past. We should take our readers on a tour of our cities and make them fall in love with them.
I have written before about the cities I have lived in and now I live in the country I only visit the fine city of Norwich occasionally. I revisited the poems I wrote about London, where I grew up, and decided to blend a few together to create something new.
I love how your city poems is so well place and time I can feel their scent.
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Thanks Björn.
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so visual – I like how you passed through different ages with the city as backdrop
“Plimsolled feet gripped
metal bars; we climbed
the padlocked gate”
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Thank you, Laura.
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Beautifully written, Kim. The tactile and sensory imagery all give us a wonderful view of what it must have been like in the city where you grew up.
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Many thanks, Dora.
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You engaged all the senses with a peep into the city life of your childhood and youth. Each stanza is like a beautiful snapshot.
Thanks for joining in, Kim.
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Thank you for your kind comments, Punam, and for the prompt.
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Marvelous! It is as if I have paid you a visit
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Thank you so much!
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very visible of the London I visited to see relatives
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I’m glad you recognised it, Rog.
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Thanks
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Nice one Kim
Much♡love
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Thank you, Gillena, and much love to you,
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A walk through the ages, with all the sights and sounds and smells! Well done!
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Thank you!
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I can feel the way you both grew up and into your city. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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Beautiful poem, I love that your narrative voice takes us not only through places, but also through your own perspective of both yours and city’s times and ages.
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Thank you so much for commenting on that aspect of the poem.
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Your poem made me recall running up and down stairs as a kid, skipping three or four stairs without a care in the world and no fear! Now I just hope my body cooperates and behaves when it is near stairs!
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I couldn’t do it now. I feel unstable on our 13-step flight of stairs!
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The piss-scented lift and the black cabs circling like sharks are great details
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Thank you!
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Kim, your poem beautifully encapsulates the journey of growing up in the city — from the challenges of flats to the liberating escape to the playing field and the nuanced experiences of London life. So vivid!
~David
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Many thanks, David! I can only tell it as it was.
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Felt like I took a walk right through the city streets of your city, Kim. ❤️
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Thank you, Aboli!
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I was a student in London and only saw those flats from the bus, but they were probably the same as Quarry Hill in Leeds, and Hume in Manchester. It’s the city that changes, and London has a character, even in the unphotogenic places like the one you grew up in. Your childhood memories are so vivid, and the plimsolls! They marked a generation.
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Thank you, Jane, No plimsolls now – only trainers!
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Thanks Kim. This is so evocative with sights, smells and sounds. I know the ‘piss-scented lift’, the ‘frisson of danger’ and the ‘black cabs circling like sharks’.
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Thank you, Carys. I’m glad it resonates with you.
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This is visceral in its attention to detail. I also wrote about London, though I only lived there briefly it left a lasting impact on our family. Wonderful to read your work!
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Thank you, Anna!
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Such vivid descriptions, I can see, hear and smell this part of city and the community. I love the black cabs circling like sharks.
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Thank you, Dianne.
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I remember when it was easy to tear up stairs. I’ve been to London one time, years ago. Speaker’s Corner stands out in my mind. Love LOVE the image of that last line…”Black cabs circling like sharks.” Bravo.
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Thank you, Yvonne!
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As teenagers, we grew into
the sounds of London ✌🏼🫶🏼
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London! I have been privileged to visit several times. I fell head over heels for the city, everything and anything I had ever dreamt. Great poetry, Ms. Kim.
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Thank you, Helen!
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That reads like a pretty intense growing up. you have created the atmosphere of normalcy amongst tension.
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Thank you, Sean.
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I haven’t heard the term plimsol for such a long time, took me back to happy times. This evoked many other memories, so rich in the way you create images.
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Thank you, Paul, I’m glad my poem took you back to happy tmes.
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We lived in Hackney when my children were small, and even though we did not live in a flat, your photo and words bring back so many memories. we too only took the stairs
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Thank you, Jane.
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These lines really stood out for me:
“buses pulsing like blood through
the veins of the city;”
“black cabs circling like sharks”
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Thanks Sara.
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