Shadows are not concrete
yet they creep beneath your feet.
You can see but you can’t hear
them, and they always disappear.
In the summer, they often linger
like gunpowder from cannon-fire.
Though short-lived, shadows stroll
into infinity together with your soul.
Kim M. Russell, 10th April 2024
It’s 10th April and we are one-third of the way through National/Global Poetry Writing Month! At Na/GloPoWriMo, today’s optional prompt is a to write poems based on ‘curious headlines, cartoons, and other journalistic tidbits featured at Yesterday’s Print, where old new stays amusing, curious, and sometimes downright confusing’. Hard to choose, I finally decided on this one.
Almost like a kenning — but lovely as is. Especially like “…they often linger
like gunpowder from cannon-fire”
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Thank you so much, Elizabeth.
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In the summer, they often linger
like gunpowder from cannon-fire.
honestly my favorite line from the poem. I really loved this Kim ❤️
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Thanks so much, Aboli.
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“In the summer, they often linger
like gunpowder from cannon-fire.”
Nice one, Kim. 🙂
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Thank you, Kitty!
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love the gunpowder! I’ll never see a shadow the same way again!
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Thank you, Brittany!
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Looks like I like the line that everyone’s already mentioned. But I also like the last couplet.
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Thank you kindly!
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Good one, Kim! I especially liked this stanza
“n the summer, they often linger
like gunpowder from cannon-fire.”
When I was little, and the sun was shining so my shadow was behind me, I used to keep turning around to see if it was still there! :) Ah, childhood memories.
I had great fun with this prompt…..took me quite a while but really enjoyed it. Will have to use it for an OLN over at dVerse.
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Thank you, Lill. I remember playing with my shadow!
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Oh that last couplet did for me! Just brilliant, Kim.
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Thank you, Dora!
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My pleasure!
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