Morning’s breath
clouds the sky before birdsong.
Where are the dreams
that woke me up?
I look for them in my teacup
and find only the fading moon.
Kim M. Russell, 28th April 2026

It’s Day 28 of NaPoWriMo and today’s optional prompt was inspired by Victoria Chang’s poem, ‘The Lovers’, which is “short and somewhat shocking, bringing us quickly from a near-hallucinatory descriptive statement to a strange sort of question, before ending on the very direct statement of a ‘truth’.” It consists of six lines, three sentences, and a title that Maureen says works for the poem but is only obliquely related to its text.
Our challenge is to write poems that follow the same beats: three sentences, six lines: statement, question, conclusion.
Nice one Kim 👏 That’s why I drink coffee! Haha!
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Bringing new meaning to a morning cuppa! Lovely.
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Thank you, Rachael.
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Beautiful written Kim 😘
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Thank you, Maggie!
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A lovely, delicate moment you describe here, Kim.
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Thank you, Nina.
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