You always said to try
to do my best, to
grow into the person I wanted to be.
You come to me as words, a
revenant, urging me to be good,
and remain in my heart as a guest.
In owl-light, I have learnt to tread
carefully, my feet landing lightly
on the right side of memory. Remember –
nothing is permanent, that
I will always think of you but never see you.
Hiding in dark corners, we are
secret scriveners and know that we are all only
ghosts visiting.
Kim M. Russell, 27th August 2026

Grace is our host for this week’s Open Link Night at the dVerse Poets Pub. She has provided an optional mini prompt that appealed to me.
Grace would like us to either use the title of a poem that is familiar to me by James McCrae, entitled ‘Instructions Before Visiting Earth’, to write our own instructions, or use a line from the poem to create a new poem of our own. I chose part of a line from James McCrae’s poem as the title, and then wrote a golden shovel using these lines:
“try to be a good guest.
Tread lightly. Remember
that you are only visiting.”
Beautiful Kim as those lines also struck and will stay with me. I love that owl-light and ghost-visiting is fine with me.
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Thank you, Grace!
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Wonderful work, Kim. I’m completely aligned with your closing stanza! Thanks.
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Thank you, Ron!
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Love it… the owl light is especially something that made me sigh
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Thank you, Björn.
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A most stunning golden shovel poem, Kim! Wow! I love the image of “owl-light.” ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, Sanaa! 💕
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