My response to dVerse Poets Pub’s Haibun Monday #15 All Things Quotidian
Toni has challenged us to think about everyday occurrences and write about them in a compact, haibun of one paragraph with one haiku at the end. The haiku must be 5-7-5 or short-long-short and must be about nature, tying the everyday things all together.
Recently, Tosca, one of our two cats, was killed on the road that runs through our village. We were all devastated, my husband and I, and Luna, the daughter of Tosca. I picked them out, when Luna was still a tiny kitten, from the rescue cats at the Cats Protection League that is based in our village, a short walk from our home – or rather Tosca chose me. Over four years the girls became the most important part of our lives. First thing every morning, I would let one or both of them out or in, feed them and watch them chase each other around the garden or just sit outside the back door in a patch of sun, contemplating the world, while I stood at the window drinking a cup of tea. They loved to climb the tall curly willow trees in the garden in a game of hide and seek among the leaves and branches, which caused me to study those trees more carefully.
curly willow tree
shadow haunt of feline fun
tangles leaves and love
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
so sad – the straight forward narrative makes the impact more heartfelt – very sorry.
I like the way you tied willow tree with the way those we love entangle themselves within us. No wonder we can never let go
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Thank you for your kind comment, Laura.
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To have a precious being like that being taken away is heartbreaking… I recall it from when we had cats, and it happened to some of them… I have always refrained for getting either cat or dog, because I know there comes a parting… yes i am a coward I know. Wonderful haibun.
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Thank you, Bjorn.
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I am sorry about the loss of your cat ~ They do become an important part of our routine and lives ~ I appreciate their pictures & that of the curly willow tree ~
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I lost both my cats — to old age; they were indoor cats — in the past year. I feel your loss. I imagine your willow weeping for the loss of its playmate.
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Thank you, Patti.
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Yes, cats do choose us! I am so sorry for your loss. This was a lovely and touching.
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Thank you, Jennifer.
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Oh, our sweet furry friends–so hard to lose them, especially in such a tragic way. They leave a hole in our hearts..That’s what happens when we care enough. So sorry for your loss.
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Thank you, Victoria.
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I remember how years ago a tiny bit of orange fluff chose me and the grief I felt at his passing. You forthright narrative do clearly shows how life moves on at their passing but also how you will always be reminded of them when you look at things they touched. Thank for the pics of these precious girls. I am so very sorry.
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Thank you for your kind words. I must saying, writing about it and sharing it with you all has been a comfort.
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Beautiful cats, Kim, so nice to see them enjoying the outdoors together. It’s never easy to lose a dear friend.
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Luna is sitting outside my window all alone. It breaks my heart to see her trying to work out where her mum is.
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Poor dear…
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Sorry again for your loss. The haiku is beautiful.
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Thank you.
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I’m not really a animal lover (I don’t even have a pet) but I found this poem touching.
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Thank you.
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Sorry to hear of the loss of your cat. It truly is amazing how a 4 legged ball of fur can so fully capture our hearts. Lovely haibun.
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Thank you Bryan.
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Sorry about your losing Tosca…I lost my dog, Lily, on the road last year. It hurts. Beautiful cats!
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Thank you Lynn.
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oh how heartbreaking it must have been……Tosca and Luna are so real here. Members of the family, obviously. Wouldn’t it truly be amazing if we could see the world through their eyes, even for a moment? I like how you’ve shifted your gaze here — to try to do that with the willow trees.
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Thank you, Lillian.
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So sorry to hear about your girl. It’s surprisingly hard to lose a pet. I love your haiku, the trees tangling love in their branches. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for reading 🙂
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