My response to dVerse Poets Pub Tuesday Poetics: Summer Starter
Walter is the host at this week’s edition of Tuesday Poetics! He has asked us to celebrate the first full (official) day of the Summer of 2016 by taking inspiration from a summer moment as seen through the eyes of another poet, something that sparks our mojos or piques our own interest. I have chosen ‘Summer Stars’ by Carl Sandburg.
So near you are,
Sky of summer stars,
I can almost pluck
Your silver sharpness,
So many shards of ice
To cool the aching heat.
So near you are,
River of summer stars
Swimming at my feet,
I long to dive in
And join your sparkling
Tickles on the tepid surface,
To cool the stifling sultriness.
So near you are,
Summer stars,
Twinkles in a lover’s eye,
Stolen from a shimmering sky.
© Kim M. Russell, 2016

Van Gogh’s Starry Night over the Rhone found on en.wikipedia.org
love your poem, Kim 🙂
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Thank you, Lady Lee 😉
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I love the sense… and I agree, stars can seem so near you almost want to reach out and grab them.. wonderful
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Thank you, Bjorn.
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Oh my gosh Kim 😀 this is absolutely gorgeous. Love the tone here and the images which you have painted are simply to die for ❤ Beautifully executed.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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You make me blush, Sanaa!
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A tender rendering here, Kim. I works so well with Van Gogh’s painting and is seamless.
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Thanks, Walter.
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I love those nights when you feel you can reach out and pick the stars. You capture it so well. We use stars in so many images and metaphors, love yours.
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I love how you write of the stars in this – so near you feel you can touch them. The repetition works so well in this. Would they were ice I could grab and rub myself with to cool down. Love it. I am a sucker for stars.
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Thank you, Toni.
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I’m fortunate to live in an area where you can still see the stars and they are such a great inspiration for poetry, as you have proven.
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I love the different types of stars you have found… Summer is many-splendoured.
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Freya!
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Lovely. The repetition is soothing and sets the tone for this wonderful piece.
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Thank you, Linda.
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Lovely descriptions and imagery in this poem.
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Thank you!
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I will echo the comments above about the repetition. Nice! I love the idea of cooling down with the stars.
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Thank you!
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Sometimes they seem just that close…and to swim in them would be marvelous!
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This is beautiful!
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Have always loved Van Gogh’s Starry Night! And the idea of the summer stars offering a coolness — if we could but pluck them from the sky and hold them like an ice cube to our sweating brow. This is a beautiful write! 🙂
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Thank you, Lillian. I hope you’re having a pleasant Friday and the weekend is offering good things!
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